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yay.

when are you going to update my friend?

Cute chapter ^^. I wonder how Randy and Shay are gonna act in public ... I would think it would be awkward (if people start to make something of it), even though they're both not shallow. But I hope things will work out so they're not just 'friends' xD

Lol, that was SOOO cute! I really loved it! And don't worry you get lots of yamyams, cookies, and pocky! I base my yamyam time restraints on the quality of writing, so I think you would still get plenty of yamyams if you took 2 months to update! ^_^ I REALLY apriciate good writing, especially near halloween, so have some CANDY!!!!! *goes into hyper-sugar mode bouncing around the room* Excuse me, I just finished trying on costumes... I still can't decide between the 6 costumes in my closet! T.T Well, update soon for more yamyams! ^_^ Oh, and I'm trying to think of something special to give to all of my lovely writers if they update on Halloween, I might end up doing art for the really good ones, just to let you know! ^_~

Moo-moo, that brings back memories. There was a kitten at the Humane Society I worked for named Moo moo. He had a very severe case of ringworm and they had to amputate his tail so he looked a bit like a little teddy bear. All roly poly and cute. And now moving on from me, I love this story. I check back every day for an update. Little Jack is so cute, I could just squeeze him. I used to be pretty universal with my dislike for kids (so noisy) but I've found that recently I developed a love for little boys. There's just something about them, they're so cute.

I have to say, I had a weird thought in one of the earlier chapters, though I dismissed it when I went back and checked. Randy's cousin's name is James and Jack's father's name was Jim (or Jimmy, I think) and they mentioned having a baby that I think was a little older than Jack so I for a minute thought by some odd coincidence that Jack's father might be Randy's cousin, but then I checked the last name and it wasn't the same and so I dismissed that thought. But that would have been interesting. Yeah, I'm going to go to sleep now. My new job has me running on low almost all the time. I feel stupid.

So the talk went alright-ish .. they got to vent a little, so hopefully Shay can work things out with Randy ... though I doubt things are gonna run smooth x) lovely chap.

I had a really you're-so-stupid moment. It finally clicked for me how the title fits with the whole story. "The truth behind the lies?" The whole point is that Randy is going to be trying to figure out the truth behind the lies. I feel like a right idiot right about now. I was getting all frustrated that Shay wouldn't just be simple and tell him the truth and quite the waffling when I looked up and noticed the title and it all clicked for me.

where you at?

ahhh
i need more
more
so please update
i need to know
what happens with
randy and shay

i just can't get enought of this story!