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for Truth Behind the Lies

by Shaznay

person Sekre
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, angst ... Girly shit, hahaha, poor Randy, getting hounded by the guys. And wow, its great to see Bryant acting normal - he seems like a pretty cool guy, even though his husbands a complete dick.
person Anon
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i've waited for that for so long and it was GREAT!
person Shelly Browne
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy cripes! I just caught up on the story, that father of his needs a coming to Jesus meeting. Can't wait to see what happens next :)

person Anon
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I keep checking for another chapter..don't leave us hangin'!
:)
person inumoon3
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story!!! I can't wait till Shay and Randy get together!!!! I hope Shay get's custody of his mother before it's too late...YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON, I'M DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!
person madlodger
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY THANKSGIVING
Hey, Scribbles, happy holiday! I just want to let you know how much I love your stories. Hope you have a good time today:D
person obeliskbeliever
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg finally yay! ^^ Please update soon!
person bambi4real
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Does larry have a bit of skirt on the side?! EWWW! What a disgusting thought. I really liked the way time moved forward also because it made it feel like the action was moving instead of slowing down like it could with no new major developments. I did however think Randy's little heartfelt speech was a bit corny. I was cringing inside reading what he said. I can't imagine a guy talking like that even if he felt that way. Of course this is an alternate universe so they can be more sensitive than normal, but that was the only thing. I did like the end. It was about time they got their jiggy on! Exams are starting for me as of today so I will be a little lax in reviews. I will eventually get to them though so never fear. Bionic reading girl will read till her eyes pop out! YEAH!
person sinheart
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please please PLEASE!! update soon. i was almost drooling at the end of ch. 8. And this is such a sweet love storey, and with so much drama I LOVE IT!!!
person Anon
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great!!!