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please keep it coming this is a wonderful tale.

Okay, I'm getting really curious as to which of the seven plagues you're going to put on Daddy Larry. What a JERK! I can't believe he's divorcing poor Bryant while he's in the looney bin. That's okay though, what goes around, comes around. Eagerly awaiting your next chapter.

I love this it do well written so, I don't know- wonder full you should have like 100 reviews for by the 5th chapter alone! Please up date soon

I'm in the middle of finals so my reviewing and reading has been sporadic at best but I finally caught up and realized I missed two ch. I thought the last ch had a classic end to it. It made me smile. This ch left me little sad. I guess I am a hopeless romantic and wanted Larry to see the errors of his ways and come back to his family to make it work. But now that he's effectviely killed the romantic in me, the vindictive bitch has come out and hopes sincerely that harper screws him over either for money or for someone else. I mean who does he think he is, he's not that much to look at and from what has been going on it doesn't look like he has done much for anyone. i know he is just trying to squeeze out a modicum of happiness from an unhappy situation but I fear his next step is kicking Shay out and if that should happen I don't even want to think about how it will affect him mentally with all his pre-existing emotional issues. I hope Shay doesn't respond by jumping into anything with Randy that he isn't ready for that would make them both miserable. Good job on the ch

I've been on holiday for 2 weeks and missed all your updates! That's why I didn't get to review Chapter 9... so I'm making it up for the lost time lol. Please update yeah? I love your story. Will be looking forward to it. ^^

Well that ending doesn't sound very good for Shay. Larry is such a bastard, he reminds me so much of my dad. A completely lousy waste of space human being. I do have one question though. With the divorce, wouldn't that put Shay in charge of his mother? So if he chose, he could have him taken out of the center he's at and placed back home. Though I guess home might not be home anymore if Larry does what I'm assuming he's planning to do...... I swear just like my dad. Doesn't care the slightest bit about his child(ren). Ay, I'm gonna stop. I'm starting to upset myself just thinking about that bastard. I'll just end it by saying I love it, as always and I can't wait for your new chapter (and of course for Larry to eventually get his)

CHAPTER 10
Good chapter, Scribbles05. I really feel for Bryant. Is he going to stay in the home forever? Larry did handle things badly but he did his best as his life was not that great for a long time.

That love scene between Shay and Randy was so hot. They did not use any protection, so, will Shay get pregnant again? Did he even think about it? He did freak out and ran away, but it was expected, he, he

Lovely story:)

Larry is a piece of shit!

I'm feeling extremely short winded today, I just wanted to say that Randy is so cute. I just to squeeze him. And little Jack too of course:D

WOW!!! Awesome story, but may I ask, is most of the town gay with children, or no??? I'm slow I know. :)