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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 12
Did you have to mention Folgers coffee and donuts in the same chapter? Ah, that's evil, I'll have to drive to the donut shop now, hehe:)
This chapter was simply hot! Well done, Scribbles05.
I am really wandering about that 'meet the family' thing. That might be awkward, I bet they will know who Shay is. Waiting patiently for the next chapter.
Thank you:)
Did you have to mention Folgers coffee and donuts in the same chapter? Ah, that's evil, I'll have to drive to the donut shop now, hehe:)
This chapter was simply hot! Well done, Scribbles05.
I am really wandering about that 'meet the family' thing. That might be awkward, I bet they will know who Shay is. Waiting patiently for the next chapter.
Thank you:)
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh no is shay pregnant??!?
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God I love you and this story!!! Plz never stop writing!!!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is it okay if I skip hating larry to just pounding the shit out of the munipulative little bitch Dennis? Cause he is a whore. Not precious little Shay. Shay deserved so much better from his father as well, he's going to be kicked out by that bastard to make room for his new whore. And poor Bryant. He has a real mental issue but that doesn't take away his intelligence or his sanity when he's on his meds. The one person he loved abandoned him. What the fuck happened to 'for better or worse' Was something changed and I not told... or the nerve of those bastards. And thos gossiping ninnies need to shut their flagging lips before someone shuts them for them. I hope Shay beats the fuck out of the whore. (dennis)
Sorry for such... a spirited review, Darkmoon Child
Sorry for such... a spirited review, Darkmoon Child
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Randy's gonna find out much sooner than he thought what it is to be a father...
morning sickness poor Shay.
I like Shay that he takes what life hands him and keeps going- I hope things end well for him
the story moves very smoothly
morning sickness poor Shay.
I like Shay that he takes what life hands him and keeps going- I hope things end well for him
the story moves very smoothly
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYY!!! An update, I nkow I have said this before, and probably starting to sound like a broken record, but this story is AMAZING!!!! I seriously love how you show the internal struggles going on with everyone, and the "old town" mentality. Oh... and could our little Shay Shay be preggers????
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 11
Loved this chapter. I am glad that you've given Larry's side of a story. So many people make a villan character one dimensional, like they are evil for no reson. It's ironic that Larry started with being in love and had dreams about a loving home and lots of kids. And look how he ended up handling things. His dream did not come true. It makes him more human, I think.
Now, Randy is in love and he wants a loving home and lots of kids too, but he is handling things entirely different. I think it's very clever of you to write it like this. Very good job, Scribbles05, I like it a lot.
HAPPY NEW YEAR, HAVE FUN WRITING IN 2007, HEHE:)
Loved this chapter. I am glad that you've given Larry's side of a story. So many people make a villan character one dimensional, like they are evil for no reson. It's ironic that Larry started with being in love and had dreams about a loving home and lots of kids. And look how he ended up handling things. His dream did not come true. It makes him more human, I think.
Now, Randy is in love and he wants a loving home and lots of kids too, but he is handling things entirely different. I think it's very clever of you to write it like this. Very good job, Scribbles05, I like it a lot.
HAPPY NEW YEAR, HAVE FUN WRITING IN 2007, HEHE:)
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! An update! Hmm... I realized this a long time ago already, after since the forth chapter, so I thought I would ask you now. Apart from the mains, Randy and Shay, I really like James and Richie! Even more than the mains I think. Heh... So will there be a specific love scene featuring them? I can't help it, I really love em! Haha! Anyway thanks for the update!
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story ::sigh:: its so hard to read, i always feel like crying, and laughing, then crying some more!!! I absolutely love it, I tuly believe this is one of the best original fics that I have EVER READ!!! No other author could touch this, YOUR HOT and so is your writing!!!
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to help. Didn't really realize that's what I was doing but ideas means more writing and nice updates so I will try to keep it up:D I liked this chapter, mainly because Shay and Randy have reconciliated.
And it was interesting to see some insight into Bryant's mind. At first when he saw that first shadow, I'd thought there was someone in the house but then I realized that must have been the first major signs of the onset. Sounds like schizophrenia. Studied that in abnormal psychology, very complicated disorder. And horrible to live with, terrifying. I have really bad nightmares and my imagination runs away with me big time whenever I watch a horror movie, and that's got to be at least 100 times worse. And now stupid Larry has him locked away in a mental institution where they keep him drugged out of his mind. *sigh* Oh well, hopefully Shay can get him out of there.
I can't wait for the meeting between Randy's family and Shay. I'm wondering if they're going to be nice and give him a chance or if they're going to judge him like the rest of those in town do. Yea, I really can't wait for next update:D Hopefully it will be soon:)
And it was interesting to see some insight into Bryant's mind. At first when he saw that first shadow, I'd thought there was someone in the house but then I realized that must have been the first major signs of the onset. Sounds like schizophrenia. Studied that in abnormal psychology, very complicated disorder. And horrible to live with, terrifying. I have really bad nightmares and my imagination runs away with me big time whenever I watch a horror movie, and that's got to be at least 100 times worse. And now stupid Larry has him locked away in a mental institution where they keep him drugged out of his mind. *sigh* Oh well, hopefully Shay can get him out of there.
I can't wait for the meeting between Randy's family and Shay. I'm wondering if they're going to be nice and give him a chance or if they're going to judge him like the rest of those in town do. Yea, I really can't wait for next update:D Hopefully it will be soon:)