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YAY:D I saw you online and I was like 'WOOOO!!!! I think she's updating' and you were so WOOOOOO!!!!!! I shouldn't be this hyper, I barely had any sleep and I haven't eaten a thing today:D Maybe it's just because it's my day off. I love this chapter. Shay's pregnant!!! Cool. And now he's going to move in with Randy!!!! Double Cool:D And next chapter we'll get to see his meeting with Randy's family. Triple Cool:D Is Aunt Corinne going to be there? You never mentioned it but she is family. Hmmmm, I guess I'll be seeing next chapter won't I so that question was a bit pointless. I really hope that they're nice to Shay, he needs nice. Though at least now he can get his mother back and he's moving in with Randy and having another baby. I wonder how Randy's family will react to that news, Aunt Corinne included. She probably won't be happy, probably start screaming and insisting on a paternity test because Shay's a 'whore'. I swear, she just embodies that small town mentality. People like that just annoy the hell out of me, preach about good values and how they're good Christian people when they're the biggest sinners out there. But like the quote says Those without sin shall cast the first stone. Weenies. Oh well, I think that's all. I hope that didn't hurt you head too much:) And of course, I can't wait for your next update. I hope it's soon, really soon, like in an hour soon, or like tomorrow soon. Really really soon:D

YAYYY!!! I knew he was PREGNANT!!! I KNEW I KNEW IKNEW!!!!!! My momma always said I was the smart one!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAYYY!!!!! BABIES!!!! FLOWERS!!!! SHOWERS!!!! Everything is green and bright!!!!! YAYYY!!!!!!!!

Oh- that was wonderful. And I mean that wholeheartedly. Shay has to be by far my favorite character in this story. He is so sweet and innocent... no matter what he has or has not done in a bed in his short life. Oh and Dennis is still going to die... but I think I've decided that Shay's father will first. What he did to Bryant is unforgiveable at best. For a moment I felt a sense of pity when he seemed to be hurting by his husband's reaction to the news. Now the bastard can just die. Oh and Shay's pregnant! Do I hear wedding bells, and a sobbing aunt Corrine? Yes- yes I think I do. Awww! This is awesome... please update soon.

yay yay yay... what could only make this better is another....lemon!

Awesome chapter...Shay's dad is a asshole...I hope his perfect life that he plans on making with that Dennis guy comes crashing down on him. I hope Shay gets his mother out of that hospital...I think it just makes everything worst. I hope everything turns out all right.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

yep, I was right, but that one was kinda staring us in the faces. lol. And also, I still think James is Jimmy. It just makes sense. Well...It does to me.

Loved this chapter^-^ and I can't wait for the next. and Ah! Shay's dad is an ass. seriously. Okay, I know he's got his reasons, but it's still no excuse.

One of the best stories I've read all year. I can't wait for Chapter 15. Keep up the great work.

I don't believe I've reviewed this story yet, sorry bout that^-^;; I ADORE this story. Seriously. It's really good.

Okay, Im going to make some guesses here. >.>
1) Shay's pregnant isn't he?
2) James is Jimmy. Right? I reread the story twice and there's so many things pointing to him, at least I think there are >.>

anyway...I'll shut up now. Keep up the awesome work. I can't wait for the next installment^-^

HA!! I did learn something in spanish class, I actually knew what he was saying. Though that could come from the fact that I live in Miami surrounded by hispanics. I can't wait for the next chapter with the meeting with Randy's family. I hope that it goes well and that they won't be judgmental, but I guess I'll have to wait and see. I guess we'll also have to wait and see what's going to happen with Larry and the house and also Bryant and the divorce. I REALLY can't wait for your next updates.

And on another note, AWWWWWW, Jack called him Daddy. That was so cute. I'm not at all the type to go squealy over little kids but Jack is just adorable.

#100 HA!!




I'm sorry I couldn't resist.