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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I WAS RIGHT!!!! I WAS RIGHT!!!! James was Jimmy. It just seemed to fit, James and Jimmy and them having two kids that are around the same age and Jimmy saying his husband was pregnant. You threw me off with your response, so I figured I was wrong but I was right. Ooooo that's going to cause some problems. Richie's not going to be happy with his man and Randy's not going to be happy with his cousin.
Right now my imagination's going wild with me and I'm picturing a huge confrontation and James meeting Jack and maybe Richie dumping James or if not him and James deciding they want to be mean and try to take Jack away from Shay which makes me wonder if 'Jimmy' signed away his parental rights or if he just decided to disappear. Oooooo, now I really, REALLY can't wait for the next chapter. So many possibilities and it's all good, well not good but goooooood:D
BTW I hope your feeling better. I was having my own issues with being sick recently so I feel your pain. So I can't wait for your next update. Can't wait at all.
And on another note, did you not want to accept anonymous reviews. Because they've made it so now you can make the choice, though it seems that there are some author's who haven't heard.
Right now my imagination's going wild with me and I'm picturing a huge confrontation and James meeting Jack and maybe Richie dumping James or if not him and James deciding they want to be mean and try to take Jack away from Shay which makes me wonder if 'Jimmy' signed away his parental rights or if he just decided to disappear. Oooooo, now I really, REALLY can't wait for the next chapter. So many possibilities and it's all good, well not good but goooooood:D
BTW I hope your feeling better. I was having my own issues with being sick recently so I feel your pain. So I can't wait for your next update. Can't wait at all.
And on another note, did you not want to accept anonymous reviews. Because they've made it so now you can make the choice, though it seems that there are some author's who haven't heard.
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Shay. No wonder Bryant wanted Randy to be careful and not hurt him and he did. I like the twists just hope things go better for Shay and Randy. love it
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP!!! what a twist!! i tell ya i was soooo not expecting that. what a way to keep your readers hanging. so that would make Jack, Randy's 2nd cousin...huh. well any-who keep up the sweet work.
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>-< I wonder how Randy's gonna deal with that? Ack! I see more drama ahead O-O
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!!! *hugs scribbles* they're MOVING IN TOGETHER!!!! Oh, and I want more of the Tramp. I loe using that word. Either realising exacly what kind of SOB he's dating or actually *bonding* with Shay or something... oh and *please* get bry out of that horrible hospital and give that SOB that dares to call himself Shay's dad pure HELL, and I'll love you forever.
Note to self: last chap I read was 14. I never remember such things.
Note to self: last chap I read was 14. I never remember such things.
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi this review is from obeliskbeliever, cause she can't log on to the computer she asked me to help review your story and this is what she said, "Thank you heaps for writing wonderful chapter 12! It's really all kinds of awesome! Thanks for updating chapter 13 too. Finally thing are looking great for both Randy and Shay. HOORAY to that!! But I'm kinda anxious about what would happen in the next chapter soon. I will be anticipating it! I hope my reviews will be some source of support and encouragement to you. CHEERS!
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this, and have only read the first chapter so far. I see I have more to go and that's a good thing.
I really like the way you set this up. I love that sort of thing. Especially Bryant and his problems. Hope there'll be more on that. Plus, I have to admit I have a thing for Mpreg. Considering writing my own but those can be tricky.
Anyway, I'm enjoying so far and I'll be reading more soon. ^^ If it's not finished *hasn't checked* then keep up the good work! If it is, hope you'll write something new soon.
I really like the way you set this up. I love that sort of thing. Especially Bryant and his problems. Hope there'll be more on that. Plus, I have to admit I have a thing for Mpreg. Considering writing my own but those can be tricky.
Anyway, I'm enjoying so far and I'll be reading more soon. ^^ If it's not finished *hasn't checked* then keep up the good work! If it is, hope you'll write something new soon.
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh this was sooo good! Hope you update soon and I really hope Larry gets a kick in the as from karma (or something) when the town laughs even more at Dennis and him then they ever did about Bry, or that Dennis leaves him!
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOT!!! I am happy that Shay and Randy are going to be a family. Damn Shay's father is a bastard. I can't see if how he ever had any good in him! Keep updating this perfect story!!!!!!! ^.^
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In case you should already have a mail I am sorry - my mail adress didn't work the way it should :(
Whatever, I just wanted to say how much I like the story. I read the first 12 chapters tonight and was already addicted *g* I like these kinds of stories most; a small town where everyone knows about everything and town talking is all they have to do. And the poor boy who has to endure a hard life. You Shay character is wonderfully written, I could feel the pain he has to go through and how scared he is to actually trust someone who could easily be one of those who hate him ... but in my eyes he managed quite good over the years. Jack is one hell of a cute little thing :)
But now everything seems fine so far, I guess bad things are going to happen soon. Esspescially with that ass of a husband Larry! While Bryant sufferes in that mental health clinic he is banging his new boy toy! And when he say he just has to 'clean the house', I don't think that means something good for Shay and his son.
But Shay has Randy to take care of him now and I hope that won't change after the family meeting. Although I was wondering, isn't Jimmy a nick for James? (or am I drawing wrong conclusions?)
Well, keep up the good work
Janine
Whatever, I just wanted to say how much I like the story. I read the first 12 chapters tonight and was already addicted *g* I like these kinds of stories most; a small town where everyone knows about everything and town talking is all they have to do. And the poor boy who has to endure a hard life. You Shay character is wonderfully written, I could feel the pain he has to go through and how scared he is to actually trust someone who could easily be one of those who hate him ... but in my eyes he managed quite good over the years. Jack is one hell of a cute little thing :)
But now everything seems fine so far, I guess bad things are going to happen soon. Esspescially with that ass of a husband Larry! While Bryant sufferes in that mental health clinic he is banging his new boy toy! And when he say he just has to 'clean the house', I don't think that means something good for Shay and his son.
But Shay has Randy to take care of him now and I hope that won't change after the family meeting. Although I was wondering, isn't Jimmy a nick for James? (or am I drawing wrong conclusions?)
Well, keep up the good work
Janine