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Damn...I love this last chapter you written so far!I was wondering when Randy was going to tell his cousin about Jack.

Yes! Die ya rotten bastard! I am soooooooooo glad James got it. That was an awesome scene there. I hope Richie gives it to him too. Oh and to make it all simply orgasmic Richie and Shay become good friends. Well I can still dream right? I really feel bad for randy the sloppy seconds crack was funny though. I had to chuckle at that. I have a sick feeling that Corrine is about to mess things up with Shay though.

damn!!! it just gets better and better every chapter! you're just tossing us drama filled action left and right. truthfully this is perhaps the best story i've read on this site. this could easily become a T.V. series. keep up the awsome work, till next time.

(everybody's making it so you have to be logged in to review....I usually leave comments as bobii.)

0.o wow...confrontation. I definately didn't see Randy saying that to Shay. It made me sad, because they're just the sweetest couple. Gr. James pisses me off. But probably cause he reminds me of a certain dickhead. >-< Poor Richie. Awwe, if he had've stayed with Randy then he wouldn't have had a cheating bastard for a husband, but then poor Shay would be all alone. Shay and Randy will make up, right?

Nice chapter. I enjoyed reading it. Like always ^-^ Faster update next time, please?

Thank u for this chapter! Still sad though, I hope better times will come. I really love the fact that Randy believes Shay and not his cousin! Great! Too bad for Richie also.

Update soon Please! I wanna know what happens next!

Ooooo, I hope it's soon. Really soon. You ended it at such a good part, I really want to know what Richie's going to do. If he's going to be one of those people who chooses to place all the blame on the other 'person' or if he's going to kick James' ass. I really hope he goes for the second option.

And Randy and Shay, I really hope Randy gets over his thing or that Shay lets him talk and he can help him get over this thing. I can understand his feelings though, worried that someone doesn't really want you for you but just because you were an easy second choice. I hope Shay can reassure him that he's not, I can't imagine that Shay would still have loving feelings for James after what he did. Also right now Shay's having Randy's baby. Anyways, I have to say I'm a bit relieved that James is still denying Jack. With Shay's reputation within that town, who knows what could happen if he decides to go for custody. Then again he could still change his mind, and I really hope I haven't given you an idea because I really wouldn't want to see that happen. Oh lord, and now my imaginations running away with me again. Just forget I said anything, we have a clear path to a happy ending, go for it:D

And lastly, I hope we get to see some of the other characters. Bryant and of course, Shay's lousy father who I'm hoping is getting screwed over as we speak. And also I can't wait for Corinne to find out that Shay's pregnant. And I really really really really really really really really really really can't wait for your next update

Oh it better be soon! Or else....

This was a great chapter (as always) I see James has gotten no better, poor Riche, hopes everthing workes out for that poor guy, having that lying cheating fucking prick as a husband!

And poor Randy, I hope Shay understands that Randy still feels the same about him but that the man is scared, I'd be scared too if I were Randy! (scared of my fucking bastard of a cousin:P)

James is an asshole...he deserved more than just one punch. I hope Richie is smart enough person to put things together, and see who his husband really is. I hope that the rift between Randy and Shay is mended. I think that make a great couple and should stay that way.

Brilliant chapter. Update soon!! (^_^)

WAHH! I'm so excited about this new chapter. XD I love this story. D: James is an asshole. D:< jdasfljsadl I hate those town's people! D:< D:< Update soon~