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OMG!!! TWINS!!!!!!!!!!! Wow!!!!!!!!!!! You are so awesome!!!

He's having twins...? Jesus help him, but AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! That's so cute! I can't wait. They're going to be so happy and finally have a good, happy family...right? *crosses fingers* Update soon!

I hope everything works out with shay and randy...and even with james and richie -he needs to just admit what he did

i admit- you've hooked me in. i'm loving this story so far!! i think i'm gonna put you, along with 4 other particular authors, on my mental list of authors to check up on every time i get on aff.net. I LOVE your characterization! it's wonderful. keep up the great work!

Twins, huh? Wow, that's.... big news. And Richie, Go Richie. I'm glad he's not going to take it and let James get away with cheating on him. Though, I have this picture in my head of James getting upset that Richie is leaving/separated from/divorcing him (whatever you decide to do) and deciding to go after custody of Jack as revenge. But I really hope that he's just really uninterested in Jack and even then just leaves them alone. Or that if he tries, Randy's 'respectability' can help. Actually I think I really hope that I haven't given you any ideas and that it's smooth sailing to a happy ending from here:)

On Corinne, I love that Shay said to her. I'm glad he wasn't going to just sit back and take her crap and let her talk down to him because she's Randy's family and he doesn't want to risk offending her. I hope that she thinks about what he said seriously and that she apologizes to Shay, and to Randy, and we see a better Corinne. Though that comment might not be enough for her to let go of years of prejudice and misconceptions. I guess we'll see

I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens with Richie and James (at this point, Richie should have already made his decisions or at least initial decisions), and Shay and Randy, and Corinne. And also Bryant, is he out of the institution? I'm assuming so since it's 3 months later and he's watching James. I hope your next update comes soon:)

lol...Thier having twins! Well this story gets better and better. Keep updating!

I guessed before the last paragraph that Shay was going to have twins. I feel sooo smart now! LOL! Good ch but I think I'm a little vindictive because I want James's marriage to go through a rough patch over this and for him to apologize and recognize he did Shay wrong.

*finishes chapter 15* oh, god. *coyo looks very pale, her voice faint* here I've spent 14 chapters HATING that scumbag who used Shay, and then you drop the bomb that he's JAMES!! Sweet, funny James. I can't believe it. It just doesn't add up. I can't believe it, I just can't believe it. *puts her hand over her mouth, shaking her head in denial* I don't believe it.

*finishes chapter 16* My poor, sweet precious Richie. Gimme a knife I'm gonna NEUTER that SOB!!! *mad gleam in dark eyes* no, gimme a spoon, it hurts more! I'm gonna carve out his heart and eat it raw, I'm gonna rip off his arms and shove them up his ass, both at the same time. Then I'm gonna... *goes on for another five minutes, with a lot of BEEEPS being heard since there might be sensitive poeple hearing* ....... and then I'm gonna do a necromantic ritual, bring him back to life and do it AGAIN! So there!

/coyo


ps. oh, and you're awsome too. :)

Hi! I'm so sorry I've never had the time to boot up my computer and post you a decent review myself. I've read chapter 14 thanks to my friend and just... WHOA. You seriously mean it when you say things were going to be interesting! Thanks and please update soon!

So James really is Jack's father ... poor Shay to see him again that way, just when he thought his life would get better. And I would be happy for Shay and Randy to become parents, but I guess Randy really fucked it up this time :( It will need a lot more than a simple "I'm sorry" to fix that again ... but he started very well by punching James lol

Hope they can work this out soon ... keep up the great writing

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