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gasp! I can't wait to see what Richie has to say to Shay. ahahahaha! I knew Dennis was a whore. Serves Larry right, I think. But him with Buggy, that was unexpected. and Bryant seems to be doing alot better now. That's good.

<3 looking forward to the next installment!

And I totally forgot to add (because I'm utterly stupid) baby name suggestions. hmmm...I like Karris and William *shrug* They don't even sound like twin names, but I like them together. Also I like Melanie and Mitchell, or Candice and Cory for something more twin-ish sounding. Kristen and Tyler, Sara and Sean. But that last one might be a bit much since Mama's name is Shay >.>

A sequel would be awesome^-^ if you did it, I'd definately read it.

Aaah, lovely cliffhanger. Totally evil, but wonderful at the same time. xD

Names that I've always loved: Christian, Andrew, Benji, Jeremy, Kaylie, & Christine.
A good set of names for twins: Kaylie & Jeremy

No idea why, but I figured I'd add my two cents. Good luck with the next chapter!

So the shithead that fathered Shay is getting his just desserts. Good riddance. I feel really sorry about Richie and the kids though and... and... *starts to cry* and I swore I wouldn't cry, but I've had the week from hell and my ribs are hurting so much after the assault... I got beat up for being black, I thought they were gonna kill me and I'm missing three teeth and I got bruises in the weirdest shapes all over my body and... and... *buries her face in her hands and cries* and I feel so stupid and useless and worthless and... and... and I bet this is how Bryant feels!! *sobs*

Im sorry, I shouldn't hoard you with this shit but everybody expects me to be strong as I always am and I just... just.. I can't be, okay?

ooo larry and dennis are so gonna break up i can feel it. all of this drama is so thrilling!! please dont stop writing cause that would just be cruel. till next time.... =^.^=

Ahh payback's a bitch. :)

Dun Dun Dunnnn!!!! craziness!!

love this story

so Larry now hears Dennis talking to a guy name Chris. Dennis is cheating because he's a whore (simple). Now he wants Bryant back! He kinda getting what he deserves!

Great chapter! I really enjoy reading this story. And finally things are looking up for Shay and Bryant, I love it. Thanx!