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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
james is sooo gonna get his ass kicked by Randy.on another note i would absolutely love a sequel about all their kids, that would be sweet! and my sujestion for the twins' names: Ryan and Kelsea. im kinda running our of things to review about other than i love it, its great, and keep up the awsome work!!
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great update! Randy and Shay are so sweet, and Larry is soo getting what he deserves, not pity saved up for him... James is a real jerk I hope he doesn't succeed in his evil little plan. And I wonder what Richie wants... hmmm... Update soon!
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this story, can't wait for the next chapter, and there should definitely be a sequel!!! Ummm, how about Lucas and Laura?
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, that will be interesting. i want to know what richie will say. Is james really such an ass? I dont want him to be mean. i want him back with richie- the two off them were soooooooo cute together, but james should suffer before. its really mean to cheat. please continue soon.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay I haven't reviewd in a while but I have had some problems and not really felt I could write a good and deserving review you now?
Ohh this is sooooo I don't know a good eough word to describe the feeling! I hope Richie and Shay becomes friends and that Richie understands that Shay didn't know James was pregnant. And Randy is soooooooo sweet, if he wasn't Shay's property could I have him maybe?
This story sucks, I want more all the time I feel like a fucking druggie or something, :( but I guess you count that as a good thing:P
Ohh this is sooooo I don't know a good eough word to describe the feeling! I hope Richie and Shay becomes friends and that Richie understands that Shay didn't know James was pregnant. And Randy is soooooooo sweet, if he wasn't Shay's property could I have him maybe?
This story sucks, I want more all the time I feel like a fucking druggie or something, :( but I guess you count that as a good thing:P
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
James is a real creep. He is going to destroy his own life .I like Ritchie too.Randy is great for Shay- and Jack well he's written so believable -
twins- yep you are evil- names- Becca and Trey for names?
and yes more stories for this world- yum
twins- yep you are evil- names- Becca and Trey for names?
and yes more stories for this world- yum
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Squeeeeeeeeee* sequel! That I want! Note to self: squealing hurts ribs. Bad idea.
Baby names: Lucas/Derek/Brian/Josh and Angela/Sarah/Mariah/Mary/Catherine. No, not Catherine, I'm already using that name in six ongoing stories. It's a good name. :)
eeeeew, ketchup. Yikes. and you left it just when it started to get interesting, too. *sigh* ah well, hopefully it won't be long until you update.
Baby names: Lucas/Derek/Brian/Josh and Angela/Sarah/Mariah/Mary/Catherine. No, not Catherine, I'm already using that name in six ongoing stories. It's a good name. :)
eeeeew, ketchup. Yikes. and you left it just when it started to get interesting, too. *sigh* ah well, hopefully it won't be long until you update.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I really don't feel bad for Larry, he has deserved it to see what he missed out on with Bry and what he has now with this Denny of his :)
Well, at least Randy and Shay are good at the moment ...
Great story!
Well, at least Randy and Shay are good at the moment ...
Great story!
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story ^.^ Lilly and Luke are good names....(so are luke and Laya..*ahem* lol)i tend to lean towards japanese names. i like Sakura and Yuki but hey it's ur story. Z.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you should make a sequel. I really enjoy your story but you should do whatever feels right to you. If you're inspired enough, I'd say go for it. I would read it probably. As for the names...I can't help you there, I'm so bad at that! I liked this chapter a lot, I really dislike James. I mean, really...for real!! And I'm very curious about Richie. Thanx!