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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE!! HOW could you end it like that? YOU are a cliffhanger-er!! POST AGAIN REALLY SOON! Love the story. Keep up the great writing.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't stay to leave a review, at least not a long one because it's 2am and I have to get up at 6:45 but YOU SUCK!!! I hate cliffhangers. What's gonna happen? And then with James, Ahhhhhhh!!!! Damn I have to go to sleep. I'll be back for a longer review. Goodnight
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dun dun duuuuun! james is an ass! i can't believe that he would use his own son like that. Wait a sec, I can believe it, he's an ass. Yeah for Richie showing up. At least he's more man than his man. Oh as for kiddie names, perhaps kaela for the girl it means precious sweetheart in Hebrew;and for the boy Ethan. I think I would like to see a story starring the kids I just would need more info before I know if it is something I would read as faithfully as this one. Good ch.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FUCK YOU RANDY!
Okay...great chapter! Kids names kids names...
how about Miku or Kasner (boy)...or May or Patrilla (girl)?
Sequels are cool...if it has more Shay in it, I'm totally down for one...unless, you've got another original story idea brewing somewhere...and more loveable characters in it! Then I'm torn. All in all, more fiction from you = goodness everywhere! YAYYYY!!!
Okay...great chapter! Kids names kids names...
how about Miku or Kasner (boy)...or May or Patrilla (girl)?
Sequels are cool...if it has more Shay in it, I'm totally down for one...unless, you've got another original story idea brewing somewhere...and more loveable characters in it! Then I'm torn. All in all, more fiction from you = goodness everywhere! YAYYYY!!!
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
James...i meant "fuck you [james]"! not randy.....randy is a good boy...good boy...
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
James...i meant "fuck you [james]"! not randy.....randy is a good boy...good boy...
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story. I would like to see a part 2 to this story. I would like to c James and Richie back together eveybody makes mistakes you know. Names could be Jayden and James or Jenna or Jamie. Something with a J to match. Great Story
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm back:) And I think I'm number 200, unless someone snuck in while I was writing this review.
First of all, yay for Randy. Telling off his bastard of a cousin, unfortunately it seems he's having bad thoughts. I was worried he might go after Jack for revenge against Shay for supposedly ruining his marriage. Though at least it seems he's only going after affection, maybe not custody. Then again maybe he will be going after custody. I hope not, and I hope if he does Shay doesn't run into a biased judge.
And Bryant really seems to be doing better. I think a lot of that probably has to do with him being in a better living environment. I guess he just needed to get away from Larry and be in a situation where he feels loved and wanted.
And Dennis with Buggy huh? That's funny. That's really funny. Larry has to be just kicking himself right now, with all these things combined. These dumb men, don't realize what they've got until it's gone. Finding problems here, issues there, not really that what you have is better than what you could find elsewhere. And now he's stuck with Dennis, at least until he gets the balls and the sense to get rid of him.
And last, Richie and Shay. I wonder what Richie's going to say. I hope he'll be nice. I really think the two could be friends, they remind me of each other. Though I will say, I don't think that Richie would attack Shay, verbally or god forbid physically, while he was pregnant. He just doesn't seem the type to do that, even if he was inclined to bitch Shay out. But with being a friend of Randy's I hope that they can move past James' sleazy behavior, which is completely and totally his fault and no one else's, and get along.
And that's all:)
First of all, yay for Randy. Telling off his bastard of a cousin, unfortunately it seems he's having bad thoughts. I was worried he might go after Jack for revenge against Shay for supposedly ruining his marriage. Though at least it seems he's only going after affection, maybe not custody. Then again maybe he will be going after custody. I hope not, and I hope if he does Shay doesn't run into a biased judge.
And Bryant really seems to be doing better. I think a lot of that probably has to do with him being in a better living environment. I guess he just needed to get away from Larry and be in a situation where he feels loved and wanted.
And Dennis with Buggy huh? That's funny. That's really funny. Larry has to be just kicking himself right now, with all these things combined. These dumb men, don't realize what they've got until it's gone. Finding problems here, issues there, not really that what you have is better than what you could find elsewhere. And now he's stuck with Dennis, at least until he gets the balls and the sense to get rid of him.
And last, Richie and Shay. I wonder what Richie's going to say. I hope he'll be nice. I really think the two could be friends, they remind me of each other. Though I will say, I don't think that Richie would attack Shay, verbally or god forbid physically, while he was pregnant. He just doesn't seem the type to do that, even if he was inclined to bitch Shay out. But with being a friend of Randy's I hope that they can move past James' sleazy behavior, which is completely and totally his fault and no one else's, and get along.
And that's all:)
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha, I just realized I was number 100 too. I'm just really good at getting in there.
Anyways, I just remembered that I forgot to answer your question. Yes, I would love to see a sequel to this story. I really like this story. I really like your other stories stories too, like Gender Dysphoria and Our Humble Little Dwelling. Hint hint. Hint hint:D I'm sorry, I couldn't resist slipping that in there.
And for the names, I dunno. I'm not good at picking names. My neighbor's son's name is Jaden and it's kind of nice. I have a friend named Vashti, I always thought it was an interesting name. So I guess those will be my two suggestions.
Anyways, I just remembered that I forgot to answer your question. Yes, I would love to see a sequel to this story. I really like this story. I really like your other stories stories too, like Gender Dysphoria and Our Humble Little Dwelling. Hint hint. Hint hint:D I'm sorry, I couldn't resist slipping that in there.
And for the names, I dunno. I'm not good at picking names. My neighbor's son's name is Jaden and it's kind of nice. I have a friend named Vashti, I always thought it was an interesting name. So I guess those will be my two suggestions.
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i would love a sequel with jack and the other kids!!! i would freakin' love it!!!