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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm still gonna stick with Kaylie & Jeremy as my pick for twin names. Just because they're cute. x) And damn, Richie had a total breakdown. I feel really sorry for him. I think he definitely deserves a hot, exceptionally sweet new guy to make him feel better, and make James jealous as hell. Wishful thinking, eh?
Oh well. I'll be waiting for the next update. This story is bomb. ;)
Oh well. I'll be waiting for the next update. This story is bomb. ;)
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 19
Nice update. This story just proves that cheaters self-destruct:) It's a Karma thing, I suppose.
I really liked Dennis in this chapter. He is not the saint by any means, but at least he is being himself and calls things a way they are. Him being kicked out proves the fact that people would prefer sweet lies to the sad truth. Oh, well, bad guys are usually ones who can't handle negative pressure, even though they are so good at putting it on others.
Jasmine - I like the flower and this name makes me think of Persian beauties.
Jeremy - This name sound sort of pure and innocent.
Nice update. This story just proves that cheaters self-destruct:) It's a Karma thing, I suppose.
I really liked Dennis in this chapter. He is not the saint by any means, but at least he is being himself and calls things a way they are. Him being kicked out proves the fact that people would prefer sweet lies to the sad truth. Oh, well, bad guys are usually ones who can't handle negative pressure, even though they are so good at putting it on others.
Jasmine - I like the flower and this name makes me think of Persian beauties.
Jeremy - This name sound sort of pure and innocent.
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okies... I like Lucas and Jayden... Kayla and Layla... I loved the update! James is such an ass, but atleast isnt the type to hate Shane just cause of something James did
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYYYYY!! I love your sotry, and i have been desperately waiting for an update, and my dream came true!!!! I know this may not be in your plans, but will Larry stop being an asshole, grovel and beg forgiveness from Bryant, and make sweet love with him?????????
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like Jayden and Kaylie, those are cute. [:
I love this story, Shay is adorable and so is Jack of course. c:
Favorite story on aff.
I love this story, Shay is adorable and so is Jack of course. c:
Favorite story on aff.
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW IT! Ever since you introduced James and I found out the age of his youngest daughter that James was Jimmy! yay! i love being right...oh well, onto the story!
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First, add me to that list. I'd definitely love to be a part of it.
Moving on, YAY UPDATE!!!! I've been waiting for it, checking every day to see if one's there.
I'm glad to see you picked one of my names, though I wouldn't worry about changing the spelling. That's probably the way it's actually spelled:D Anyways, I guess it's a given that I'd be voting for that. The other names are okay, but two of them have a connection to kids I knew in school (and I had a crappy school experience for the most part) and the third (Lucas) is just a name I've seen once too often in soap operas. For the girls.... hmmmm..... Jasmine is the name of my friend's cat so I have to say that would be weird. Karris is a bit ambiguous, Laya is sort of too. I think I'll vote for Kaylie. So Kaylie and Jayden.
On to the chapter itself, poor Richie. I feel bad for him. He's in a real cruddy situation between having to deal with the pain of his husband cheating on him and dealing with a son who doesn't know/understand the situation. I have a half brother who really loves his dad, a dad who cheated on my mom and then kind of disappeared for a long while before getting back in contact recently well into my brother's adult years (he's 31). He's improved but at the time his dad's word was basically gospel. My mom would tell him something and he'd ignore her, but his dad would say the same thing and he'd jump on it. Not
Moving on, YAY UPDATE!!!! I've been waiting for it, checking every day to see if one's there.
I'm glad to see you picked one of my names, though I wouldn't worry about changing the spelling. That's probably the way it's actually spelled:D Anyways, I guess it's a given that I'd be voting for that. The other names are okay, but two of them have a connection to kids I knew in school (and I had a crappy school experience for the most part) and the third (Lucas) is just a name I've seen once too often in soap operas. For the girls.... hmmmm..... Jasmine is the name of my friend's cat so I have to say that would be weird. Karris is a bit ambiguous, Laya is sort of too. I think I'll vote for Kaylie. So Kaylie and Jayden.
On to the chapter itself, poor Richie. I feel bad for him. He's in a real cruddy situation between having to deal with the pain of his husband cheating on him and dealing with a son who doesn't know/understand the situation. I have a half brother who really loves his dad, a dad who cheated on my mom and then kind of disappeared for a long while before getting back in contact recently well into my brother's adult years (he's 31). He's improved but at the time his dad's word was basically gospel. My mom would tell him something and he'd ignore her, but his dad would say the same thing and he'd jump on it. Not
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, the stupid review sent before I finished:'( I was saying it's not quite the same but I know it did bother my mom.
I've so lost my train of thought now, so I think I'm going to try to wrap this up in as coherent a manner as I can.
I'm glad to see Dennis (dude I was so calling him Gary, I don't know where that name came from:D) told Larry off. He is a slut but he's got a lot of insight for a slut. And hopefully that will help Larry see himself a bit. Personally I still say screw him but an apology to Shay and Bryant would be nice.
Also, I find I'm worried about what James is going to do. Especially with your response. I didn't think his intentions were the best but I found myself kind of hoping. Hopefully whatever he does won't be lasting and won't have too painful for Shay. And if he does try something that could/would be hopefully Randy and Shay together could waylay (not the word I was looking for but close enough) him. I think that's about it.
And I can't wait for an update of Our Humble Little Dwelling. If I remember correctly, I think that's the first of your stories I read and what turned me on to the rest of them. I love it:)
I've so lost my train of thought now, so I think I'm going to try to wrap this up in as coherent a manner as I can.
I'm glad to see Dennis (dude I was so calling him Gary, I don't know where that name came from:D) told Larry off. He is a slut but he's got a lot of insight for a slut. And hopefully that will help Larry see himself a bit. Personally I still say screw him but an apology to Shay and Bryant would be nice.
Also, I find I'm worried about what James is going to do. Especially with your response. I didn't think his intentions were the best but I found myself kind of hoping. Hopefully whatever he does won't be lasting and won't have too painful for Shay. And if he does try something that could/would be hopefully Randy and Shay together could waylay (not the word I was looking for but close enough) him. I think that's about it.
And I can't wait for an update of Our Humble Little Dwelling. If I remember correctly, I think that's the first of your stories I read and what turned me on to the rest of them. I love it:)
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Thanks for the chapter. I really like all the dialogue, espeically with the accents. It sounds so natural :) And as for baby names I like Derek for boys and Jasmine and Kaylie for girls.
Oh yeah, here's my email address for the mailing list: aoilde@gmail.com
Looking forward to the next update!!
Oh yeah, here's my email address for the mailing list: aoilde@gmail.com
Looking forward to the next update!!
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like Kaylie, Jayden, and Derek. I don't really like the other girl's names xP
I'm so glad you updated, I really liked this story and was disappointed when I realized it hadn't been updated in a while. It weirded me out a bit, too, because I had been thinking about it a while ago.
I'm so glad you updated, I really liked this story and was disappointed when I realized it hadn't been updated in a while. It weirded me out a bit, too, because I had been thinking about it a while ago.