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You know I just realized I forgot to come back and review this story. I actually made a note for myself to do it, but I guess I didn't see it later. After these last two updates, I'm feeling really sad for Bryant. If Larry is what's necessary to pull him out of his funk, then I'll take Larry. That's preferable to him killing himself to rid Shay of the burden of him. It's just sad that he doesn't see that the benefits of having his mother around outweighs the burden. It would be nice if Larry could do something nice for him, like recreate important points of the past. Something to help to make him feel worth something again. I would love to have Shay be able to do it, but with his own life and a baby on the way and James pulling his crap, he wouldn't be able to focus on Bryant. I think he needs someone who could focus all their attention on him, which Larry the loser seems to have the time to do and finally the inclination.

For Richie, I hope he tells the kids the truth. I'm surprised they didn't think something was up when their dad brought in their brother. They're brother who's the same age as their little sister. But I think the oldest little brat is so busy being upset at his mother he's not even trying to see things. This may sound mean, but personally I'd love to see him begging forgiveness from his mother and pissed at his father, as it should be. The amount of pain he's caused his mother, it's shameful. And he's old enough to know better at that age. I know I was. And I will add, I think Richie is much better off without James. Any man who'd cheat on his husband, father a child that he then abandons, and then turns around and tries to use that child (hurting the child in the process) to get revenge, he only deserves crap.

And Shay, I hope things settle for him soon. It seems like it's heading in that direction, but I hope it does settle soon. I hope that James either gives up on his plan or someone (Randy or Shay) confronts him on the whole thing.

So yeah, that's all. Can't wait for your next update. For Gender Dysphoria too, which I'm now remembering I also forgot to review so I'm heading over to do that now.

I want on, pick me! :) Okay Larry looking abject is just too incongruous. Larry the asswipe, I get. I'm with Bry on this one, best wait and see how truly sincere he is. Shay though with his protect mama attitude is starting to get on my last nerve! I mean you would think he would have enough problems of his own without getting in the middle of his parents.

wow....I go without internet for a month only to come back and find that not only is this story updated, but there's 4 new chapters. =D Also a new Gender Dysphoria chapter, which I'm going to go read here in a minute. =]

Wow, lots of twists. The last two chapters had me in tears. Part of me hates Larry, but another part is really rooting for him to win Bryant back. I'm glad Dennis is gone, too.

WOW!!!! Whata powerful chapter. PLEASE let Bryant and Larry gettohether again and live happily ever after, or let SOMEONE fall in love with Bryant!! HE's been tortured enough, poor thing!!!!!!! And don't let James evil plan prevail!!!!!!!

I've actually read your story for quite a bit of time, I dont remember what chapter it was on when I first started, but I think it'd be somewhere in the middle now. It's a very interesting story.

Please add my email to your update list! Thanks!

Oh, please, please, write more... I just love this story! Email: angeliquevigeelebrun@gmail.com
Also, I hate James! *sharpens knives to kill James. Don't make Jack love him, please...
Looking forward to following updates, Regards, SH

New reader. Your story is marvelous. It made me cry to see Shay struggling. But it's ok now since he has Randy. Please keep me updated. Thanks

*Munches Cookie* Omg!! No!! What's going to happen!! Poor Bry T___T Great Chapter!

I just started reading this story and couldn't stop. It just kept getting better and better. At first I was confused because momma wasn't a gender specific term, but it only lasted seconds. I became engrossed in this story and finally I am caught up. Please update soon. Thank you for sharing it.

Aww, poor Bryant, I hope he's ok!

...And now I think James is even more of a prick than before.
He will get his day, oh yes he will! >:D