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It's been forever since this was updated and I wanted to know if it ever would be?

That was a wonderful story hope you can come back to it.

i finally finished reading---when i finished chapter 31 and there was no "next chapter" i was freaking out thinking "that's it". please update soon,the story is getting really good i would love to know what happens next

Scribbles, so glad you're back! :)

I did have to rea-read the last chapter just so I remembered where it left off. Now I remember everything! =)

I thought the whole festival scene with the kids was really cute. Dante and Richie were both nervous letting the other person know about their kids.

And then on the other hand, it was heartbreaking reading about how far James has fallen. He needs to speak to someone; a therapist; someone otherwise he's going to destroy his life and put his kids in danger. If he's doing that much coke, he's gotta be doing it with the kids around. That's unacceptable. God forbid something happens to him, those kids are so young, will they even know what to do if he collapses or something?

Great chapter Scribbles! Looking forward to more....maybe a bit sooner this time? lol

Hi, new reader here.

I just started reading Truth Behind the Lies yesterday and I am already finished with the chapter avaliable. I have to tell you, I really love this story and characters, espically Bryant. I guess it is because I have a uncle with a similar problem as him that I care about what happens to him the most.

My email address: Kaykenner54@hotmail.com .

Can't wait to read the next chapter. :)

i just left this ultimately long review but AFF ate it. i just read the whole story for 2 days and i want you to know i enjoyed it. i love all the characters. it's rare that i enjoy all characters involved in the story, but this got me hooked. i shall review properly once i figure out how this review process works. it seems to have changed since the last time i visited AFF. i don't frequent here much anymore so thank you for giving me a reason to check this site every now and then, just to see if you've updated.

Gimme an award i read this whole story in 2 days xD Man I love it, I didnt use to like Mpreg but I've grown to like it over the months =P I found your story to a rec wait list of a friend =P Plss add me to ur update list I cant wait for more! OMNOMNOM gimme some sugar sweetness between Larry and Bry and kick James ass and let Richie be happy he sounds so cute =P And also ty for teaching me a bit of spanish xD I'll be sure to remember =)
Update soon? =D

“Those were one-night stands. What you had going on with Randy was a relationship. You wouldn’t have gotten yourself that involved with a man if you knew he was married. Especially if you knew that the relationship might not last and he’d up and leave you to go back to his spouse at the drop of a hat.”

did you mean 'what you had going on with "James" was a relationshp'?

i just want to make sure i was getting the same picture in the sentence as you, because i'll make more sense that way. Randy telling Shay that his time with James was a relationship. it just odd if it's really Randy your refering to, him speaking in a third person point of veiw than switching back to normal.

I know, it HAS been such a long time. I barely even remember where I am in all of your stories! But life gets so busy sometimes. Writing is tough...i'm so surprised I actually wrote something...a new story go figure! ha! Well, I'll just have to reread some of your stories now that I have some free time to see where I left off.

Was so happy to see this story update. Love it and can't wait for more. Lots of things happened this chapter. Can't wait to see how Richie's surprise goes and how Donte reacts to the kids. I want to see good things happen for him in a bad way. Poor guy deserves it after what he's been through.