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for If I Knew Then....

by Mya416

person oo
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ka-chow!
person kiix
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah...hmmmm, knock, knock, knock. Hello? Anyone out there? Does BlackOpal need to rescued? Sunday went by and no update? *Looks at the scratches on the wall* yup 7 days. Don't disappear again. Please. I'll be good. Well, good for me. I'm better when I'm bad..but I digress. My tictacs are almost GONE!!! *find your happy place, find your happy place...* Update soon, k?
person kiix
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sebastard is right. Never did like that vamp. Unfortunately I know people like that who cannot handle disruption of their routine. While they don't get all hitty and shit, they do get upset and whiny. And poor, poor kitten. When he is going to be released from concussionville? You just might be beating another personality into that noggin of his. HA! Anyways, lovely lovely tidbit of writing. Another hundred more tidbits and we get a millabit, which would start really filling out my hunger for were-kitten and vampire bait stew.

Don't worry about, I'm over medicated....I might just erase this later if it makes no sense.

More please!

Kiix
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Sebastian is a traitor...or so it seems...enjoyed this chapter and looking forward to the next!
person Rorarin
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You're back! ))))) I was afraid the story had been forgotten. Oo they are leaving! What's going on?
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was thinking more icecream this time but if you want the cookie... *hands another cookie* poor boys just can't get a break.
person PassionPoet
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG an update! Loved it, although the time-lapse threw me a bit. =P

Thank you for coming back and writing more!
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't remember if I ever reviewed, so I'll do it now.
I really like this story. I am so happy you've updated and in the mean time I've enjoyed the oneshots you wrote about these vampires and of course "kitten".
It is a very well thought-out story and very interesting. I am intrigued more and more everytime I read a new chapter. I can't wait for you next chapter!
Thanks for sharing this story.
person yunasgrace
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that your continueing with this story!!!!!
i remember reading upto chapter 32 and thinking its ashame that your not gonna complete it coz really loved the plot and i especially loved Martins scarcasm xDDDD
I cant believe you ended it where you did though *evil death glare*
i wanted to read more of martins witty comments or even Martin and Bram argueing (well it aint exactly argueing as i dont think bram will lower himself to argue... he just takes it that hes right all the time xD)

im so glad your back and i really cant wait for another chapter ^^

till next time
yunasgrace
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this story last summer so I've been at it for a year. I was sad for awhile because I didn't think you were going to update so because you did you get a chookie. *hands cookie* please update soon.