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for If I Knew Then....

by Mya416

person oo
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woah, martins bitter about being bitten... hmmm
and the confession about why hes there, and hmmm, sebastian leaving
youve got so much going on and i cant wait for more.
ive gotta have more.....
person kiix
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahem. In case you missed it, let me paraphase.

MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!

Thank you.
person ri
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi...i'm your new fans! *just finished ur 36 chapter in a row...thanks for kiix recommendation*
i just love the babblin of Martin! sometimes it's so twisted i laugh. Did he already know that almost everyone able to hear everything he babblin? And why their reaction simply amused? I'm sure i'll be on rampage if i hear every word he said on his mind!

And my favourite character is...Julian! i dunno why. It's just...hmmm...He seem deeper than his impression. And his chosen of words gives me impression that he indeed smart.

Please update soon...

Ri
person ri
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
once more *forgot*. Did Martin got any stronger pride about his drooling over almost every boy he met? i mean... yeah..u know what. Just curious about this trait of his. And i still not too understand about vampire thingie, from hearing thought, et cetera. Will it be explained soon? Cause i'm curious, like which thought can be heard by other...what's the requirements...and maybe more about vampire story world of yours :)

Keep up the good work,

Ri
person Saminada
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god! *goes hide under her bed*

I can't believe I haven't left u a review for the last two chapters!!! *don't kill me*

It's sooooooo not because I didn't like them! ...Just blame my laziness! LOL

The latest chapters that I haven't review yet were fantastic!

I just can't wait to hear Bram's explanations! *humhum*

Anyways, thanks alot for the updates! LovedThemLovedThemLovedThem!! :D
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I'll kill you. Worst cliff hanger ever! please, please, please update soon!?
person kiix
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was killing me. Absolutely killing me to see your review button stuck at 299. There is probably some compulsion or *mania for that but I just had to do something about it. So hopefully this is 300.....aaahhh even numbers.

So..someone is killing kittens? And Brahm just isn't a vampiric kat napper. Well doesn't that just hit him with the spotlight of nobility. Cool. As for Sean, by shearing off his hair, he's growing a spine? Blue, I like. Sebastard can disappear...so can edward. creepy little butler. Can't forgive him for helping Brahm scaring the crap out of kitten when he first showed up. So...waiting for the next installment. More...more more....
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update its been so long!!!!!!!
schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far...*grins sheepishly* i actually read the whole thing today and wanted to wait to review when reached the last chapter posted.....i love this story it is so extremely awesome and i cant wait for you to post more. if i was a billionaire i would definitelty make you independently wealthy so you could write all the time.
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Finally we are going to read why Bram has taken Kitten. I'm excited and can't wait for the update. Can I just tell you that I am really starting to like this vampire family...including Bram...great chapter!