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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are very obedient. Keep up the good work. (eeew, I just creeped myself out.)
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I truly like your story - and have it saved to check for updates.
But one little critique - you should start a new paragraph each time the speaker changes. Makes who is talking much clearer.
Really looking forward to what sort of trouble Sean is in....
But one little critique - you should start a new paragraph each time the speaker changes. Makes who is talking much clearer.
Really looking forward to what sort of trouble Sean is in....
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice discipline... excellently described.
But I do wonder just which character will be 'brought to heel'...
Nice that the vamp has a soft spot. (And a hard-on.)
But I do wonder just which character will be 'brought to heel'...
Nice that the vamp has a soft spot. (And a hard-on.)
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't too lazy to log in this time. Anyway, I hate where you stopped! I can't wait for the next part, keep it up and I look forward to reading the next part. Poor, poor kitten, he needs to learn his place. Of course the breaking can be the best part.
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Keep it coming. :)
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chappie :). And my what wonderful singing voice the Kitten has XD. Can't wait for the next chapter :).
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely - I do so enjoy seeing the brave and brash brought to heel. {grin}
I'm assuming our vamp will see to that?
I'm assuming our vamp will see to that?
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HHMMMM, very interesting story you got here ^_^. I can't wait to read what happens next. Kitten... that is so funny, that should be his pet name from now on ^-^!
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning ! update please
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was too lazy to log in but wanted to tell you what I thought so far. Most excellent, very well done and I look forward to the next part. Keep up the wonderful work.