AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for If I Knew Then....

by Mya416

person rachel
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow im glad i found this! and its really starting to get more interesting, i love the dynamics between the characters. look forward to more.
person katzies
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
funny!!! update soon please it was great!
person Anon
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story! Will Sean learn to stand up for himself with a little influence of a cute were-leopard or is he really the devoted submissive cry-baby for everyone?
person sissy
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love your story. martin is so resilient and i adore his quirky personality. the story is dark but at the same time it retains some lightness with his nonchalance and with everyone's mixed feelings- i love how there's not a lot of black/white going on here in terms of personality, it makes the complexity more intriguing and interesting. i'm dying to see martin as a cat. (i'm wondering if it'll make him more capable of defending himself? would he gain the advantage of intimidation in his new form?) i have to say, i'm very frustrated on his behalf- he's been kidnapped, beaten, humiliated, and raped, yet he's treated as the bad one. i totally empathize when it seems like he'd love to bang his head against the wall at the irony of it all! i'm so furious at bram's sociopathic tendencies but at the same time dying to know his reasons for this.

love to watch the plot unfolding.. and thanks for the frequent updates. :)
person ojo
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweetness!!! The story just gets better and better! and I'm happy to hear that the cat is going to come out and play! nya!more!
person Saminada
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Muahahahaha!!! He hates water?? He's a what?!!?!?
...and when are you gonna tell us why he was kidnaped??? He's special? About what?

Well anyways, thanks alot for the update!! It was very good and I fell kinda bad for Sean since I know that he's not a bad person inside...I hope Martin will see that soon!
person Kage
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor kitten, hopefully he learned something from all this. Wonderful chapter and well worth the wait, I look forward to the next part. Keep it up!
person lase
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is great. I just love Martin!!!
person ojo
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOO!!! so good so far!!! will Martin get a name change? will he ever get to change into his leopard half? I'm curious as to what his other self looks like. Please update soon!
person kiix
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay, that ends cooking with ginger for me. Good story. Purrrrr