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for If I Knew Then....

by Mya416

schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh lord honey your killing me over here. I am completely obsessed with this story. Cant you please just update so I can go back to loving you? Oh I wonder what Bram is going to do to Martin over this. Also are we going to find out what is so special about Martin anytime soon? Is he going to transform anytime? Will something happen if he doesn't transform at full moon? Is there going to be any Bram/Martin action ever? Gaaahh doll your driving me up a wall. Have a nice day though.
person Kage
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He just doesn't know when to stop, of course Sebastian deserved it *nods* but the result I don't think will be worth it. Wonderful part and I can't wait for the next one.
person SnaredCatPaws
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*gigantic eyes*
Dang. This truly is a work of art. Very good. Can't wait till next chapter.

Overall, I think Thad is the best. He is the sweetest so far. Can you TRY to not let him hurt the poor kitten? Sean already did, and we saw where that got Martin.

And again, can't wait until next chapter!
person katzies
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! A new chapter!! OHHhhh someone's in trouble now!!!
person Mitts
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ut Ho...I take it Bram just walked into the room?
Sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I've only just started reading your brilliant story. I'm as interested as the vampire boys, to know why Martin was selected to join their little family. Is his ability to change into a feline the only reason? Or is there something else about him that made Bram choose him?
Hope to see an update soon.
person Dots..
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh..my. Methinks Sebastian is feeling unloved and jealous..that and vampires apparently never heard the phrase 'Can't get respect without giving'...
person kiix
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Absolutely love it. Looking forward to whatever updates you can give your readers before you wing off east. Krinkle bags for kitty.

kiix
person DrkDreamer
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my - all the childers getting caught playing with Kitten in the bath.

Suspect daddy isn't going to be happy...

Excellent chapter!

person Jane_Lane
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person alla
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm going to get SO pissed if martin is punished again; he was only defending himself and sebastian is a right prick. i think if martin didn't have the possibility of shifting and making an escape, this all would have started to wear him down by now, there's only so much someone can take, and these vamps act like it's his own fault for being kidnapped and raped which is ludicrous and insane. i'm really rooting for him to change form and kick their asses!