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for If I Knew Then....

by Mya416

person aisha
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*screams and whacks you with paper* QUIT IT WITH THE CLIFF HANGERS!!! XDDDDDDDDD I'll die here!
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You write the spunky little fighter SO well!

Occurs to me that Kitty-Martin is the polar opposite of Nicea. Very interesting to compare characters.

Think I'd have a hard time closing my eyes, too - Nicea and Anekin would do it in a flash.

Really good chapter - eagerly awaiting Bram's next commands!
person Kage
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Horrible cliff hanger but wonderful none the less! I can't wait for the next part, I want to know what's going to happen too.
person Kawanee
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooo liking this story...
I think I might have missed at the beginning that he was a werecat to start with... I'll have to reread it and make sure, because I was REALLY confused about why Bram told Martin he "WAS part cat"

At first I thought it was just the standard... human as a pet reference.

When it came to taming animals, I always thought kindness was the surest way to gain thier loyalty... although I guess even lion tamers have to show the lion who is boss at some point?

Anyway... loving the story!! Hurry and update pwease?
person kiix
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh, the suspense....you're killing me. You are killing me. Eh? But what a way to go.
Kudos and katnip, good chapters. More, more, more. (Oh, the by way, I've been de-clawed.)
person Mitts
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts

So...what just happened there? Did the bite somehow drug him, and make him think/feel things that weren't really happening?
And will he really die if he doesn't shift? And will Sean be able to kiss and make up with him?
It was good to see the chapters updated...well done! lol
person PassionPoet
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Been a while since I reviewed, and it is as good as ever, if not better!

Keep up the good work, lovey.
person aisha
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! THIS IS GETTIN' SOOOOO GOOD!
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please don't pass out from exhaustion - I need that next chapter!
person Raka
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee i love it. It's a really nice story and i was wondering is Martin a reincarnation of Bram's old lover or something like that because i read story sort of like them. Only this Bram is a demon instead of a vamp and that martin is just a male high school human who use to be a female prietress