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for If I Knew Then....

by Mya416

person Saminada
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the Valentine's Day update!!!!!
It's really good! Tho I'm sad and worried for Sean and Martin!! T______T

I wonder if Kitten's only a substitute or something??? It sure looks that way anyways...

person kiix
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm orgasms and sharp objects definately do not go together well. Good chapter tho. (yes, I'm twisted.) Happy V day. Cat grass for everyone. Write more please.
person Mitts
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts

Oh my...I love this...I love how Martin is still in blissful ignorance of Bram reading his mind...of how he corrects himself over his 'little' traitourous prick, lol, very funny!
And now, Bram is getting ready to seduce Martin, by adding candle light...How romantic!
One question...How come the Holy water with silver didn't actually hurt Martin, like Bram thought it would?
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot.

Extremely hot.

So glad you posted.
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOl I wonder when Martin will figure it out that he doesnt have to say it outloud in order for the other dude to know what he wants to say. But his so funny, especially with what he thinks of to amuse himself, with the masters name and all, and when his mind seems to wonder in the middle of doing things. Gotta love his character...

I really want to see him shift! :D

Great update, I can't wait for the next one, I don't mind more questions, just no more cliffie....
person aisha
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE! I love you!
person Lychee
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So good! Poor Martin, they really are a bunch of weird vampires, and I do wonder whats so special about him that Bram is so intent on having him, I wanna see him transform...

Look forward to your next update!
person Mitts
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts

Ohhhhh...and you would stop there, wouldn't you? lol...That is so mean! Please hurry up with the next chapter, I want to see what happens next!!!!! Like, yesterday...lmao!
I'm surprised that Bram didn't react more, seeing as he can read Martins mind...But perhaps he doesn't want the other to know about this ability just yet? Storing it all up for punishment time..lol..
person Anon
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaah! Cliffy cliffy cliffy!
person katzies
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh, what will come next I wonder? I'm guessing more punishment but hey I'm not complaining. *evil smirk* I'm excited for the next chapter. I love the way you write martin by the way, hehehehe he really amuses me. great last 2 chapters as always.