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for If I Knew Then....

by Mya416

person Saminada
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.M.G!!! O____O
That scared the shi* out of me!! I was soo scared that they would kill Martin! T___T
Everyone is angry him now! ...I hope they wont hurt him too much, the poor Kitten is just soo confused! ;; *Plz be ok Kitten!*
I can't wait to see what happends next! Plz update soon!
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cliffy cliffy! want more!
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL so typical of Martin, so hot headed, but of course he wouldn't be Martin if he sat there and did nothing. Well atleast Sean is ok, but gosh Bram is going to hurt him so bad. And showdown hey? Now thats something I want to see, Martin really doesn't seem to fit this lifestyle, he is totally not the submissive type...

Well I look forward to your next update!
person k
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Giving poor little kitten answers sounds good - a little late though, but better than this 'do what we say when we say it without any questions' - bullshit. Asking if Martin ever thought about this or that beforehand - hey it's not like someone had given him a manual "Vampire code of conduct". As far as I remember he hadn't even have the time to read the rules properly. Will Thad be punished for not keeping Martin in line?

Get wells to Sean and thank you for this chapter! Looking forward to the next.
person rwalaer
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah Martin!! For a little guy hes got backbone and guts. Not much brains right now but plenty of guts. Can't wait to find out why the master wants him so much and how that will affect everyone. I'm totally hooked on this. Vampires,wereleopards,hot guys.....oh yeah I'm hooked.
person kiix
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nothing like a good branding to end a nasty affair. Never saw that coming. Just mix a little ginger in and it's full time for all masochists. Good chapter, as always. More please. :) Poor kitty.
person Kage
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait! That was a very, very stupid thing he did but I really can't blame him. Instinct is when you see someone in pain to try to stop it and I can understand not wanting to hear him scream anymore, but that was really stupid. Keep up the wonderful work and i look forward to the next part.
person ojo
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter! ^_^... but will martin ever NOT mess up for once? Its making me cringe everytime he messes up now.
person Mitts
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts

Bram whipped Sean? He WHIPPED him, for daring to speak up for Martin? How could he? And what is the second part of poor Seans punishment going to be like? Hopefully, the worse is now over?....
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh - owie.

Pain is only love when the recipient enjoys it. And, although Sean was very brave, I didn't get the impression there was any joy.

Looking forward to the rest of the chapter. And getting Martin's reaction.