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for If I Knew Then....

by Mya416

person ojo
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
;0; Cliffhanger!??!! your such a tease!!! ^_^
person kiix
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh the pain the pain. Get better soon. As a klutz, I have either strained, pulled or broken most necessary appendanges over the years. So I send to "you get well wishes."

Kitten, what they hell are you think you're doing? Now, what other trouble is he getting in to? Claim Vamp Daddy?!! Really. I think asses are going to be kicked severely.

Offers up mice stuffed with painkillers. I think Kitten is going to need it.

Kiix
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have I reviewed this story? Hmmm. . . Well, if not just pretend I have. OOOO things are getting INTERESTING!!!!! I can't WAIT for more!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
person PassionPoet
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Babe, damn but do you ever know how to write!

I had no idea where you were taking this, and just... wow. B-E-A-UTIFUL!

Keep up the good work, dearest.
person Caffy
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
24 - Caffy is waiting for more. Omigawdddd they're fighting! Let Kitty get a couple of good scratch in, kay? lol I want to see Kitty cry and lose his will eventually too. xDD
person Caffy
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
24 - And... you broke your foot? >>;
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more!!
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!! I'm sorry you broke your foot, that must really hurt, but horrible place to leave off. I'm sure that the poor little stupid kitten is going to get his ass beat but it's so entertaining to see it happen :X Wonderful job and I can't wait for the next part, keep it up and update soon!
person Sforza
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Geez I was wondering when Martin would do something again. Ha, the poor guy.

And I had wondered what Bram was doing with that cross aside from random torture. I like Celtic crosses and jewelry for that matter. Don't own any though. Those facts having absolutely nothing to do with your story.

Anywho, you mentioned something about a showdown between Bram and Martin. Looking forward to it.
person Kawanee
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was sooo horrible for Sean!! You do love to torture your characters don't you? Can we at least hope for some good make up sex between Sean and Bram?

I wanna see some niceness...

Anyway good job!!! love the story!