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for If I Knew Then....

by Mya416

person Anon
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You killing me here! Pretty please update soon!
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have passed by your story so many times but I have been much to lazy to read it *smiles shyly* but this morning i began to read it THIS SO ROCKS ^^ I could stop reading one chatper after the other *sorta like a bag of phoato chips, once you had one, you can't stop* so can't wait to read your next chapter, but just curoius, Sean is from england if I remeber correctly, so do all the other vamps. have english accents...jw thats all

*sorry for rambling ^^*

~Mizuki
person wanderingaddict
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I keep hoping for someone to show Bram up and knock him down a peg or two, but it's just not happening.

Alas, woe is me.
person kiix
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! You did to me again! I did my little happy chair spin...and wham....you tore out my heart. *sniff* Anyways, please get better and type. Caramel squares are being offered as a bribe.
person kai
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time i've actually read this story and i really think its sooo goood! I read it all in a day...heh.
I just thought i'd tell you that, can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person Sforza
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I return and there are two chapters. Sweet! Ha ha, YES! Finally Bram and Martin. Too bad he uh... blacked out? Poor kitten. Hmmm, I thought that good old Martin wouldn't give in yet, but then again he really didn't have any other options.

All in all, I loved it!
person katzies
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor martin, unmaned yet again..... lol I love it He tries so damn hard.
person Mitts
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts

What the fudge????? So, Bram finally gets Martin to submit to him...Finally slams into his ass....Only for Martin to pass out???? Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
That was a massive tease...Shame on you....lol
Oh, I loved this part by the way....

He was still attacking my nipples like they were covered in his favorite candy...or blood type I guess.

I love the way Martin thinks!

Ooooooo, double long chapter next time eh? And the introduction of a new character...Can't wait!
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am greatly offended that you shortened my name. . .hee hee just kidding. OMG OMG OMG SEX YAYAAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!! Verrrrrry hot!!!!!!!! Ok I was thinking, and maybe I'm just way too perverted for my own good, but it would be REALLY hot to have some Sebastian/Kitten sex!!!! You know with all their pent up rage at each other and then BAM!!! SEXUAL FRUSTRATION!!!! I'm all over the love/hate sex! Which is probably why I love this story so much!!!! Anyways, AWESOME chapter!!!!! I can't WAIT for more!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE OR I'LL POKE MYSELF IN THE EYE MAYBE!!!!!!
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, what happens next?! I hate when things are left off like that but I just can't get enough. Keep going!