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Yay!!! another chapter! things are getting interesting now!
((i have to admit, i did sit and snigger for a moment at the mental picture of Bram all tied up and gagged!))
ohhh!! whats going to happen! the suspence, the suspence!!!
good luck and up-date soon!

I must say that Martin is by far my most favourite character in this delightful story of yours. The way you have him piecing his monologues/inner thoughts together is very amusing and humourous and I never get tired of his sarcastic wit ...even if it does get him into trouble. The fight of dominance between him and Bram was great! Enjoyed it all the way through! (though I was rooting for catboy to win *snigger)
I admit that the different point of views between the characters throws me off every now, and then but it's nice seeing what their thoughts are as well.

Ah, also while the Greek in your latest chapter is more or less corecct, the grammatical context is completely off. Here's the proper translation:
doule: slave
kyria, afise ton mono: mistress, leave him alone

You also had [eimai iremos doulos] which means "I'm calm, slave" (in the male context)... "eimai iremi, doule" (in the female context) To say "be quiet slave" like you had in your translation, it's "min milas, doule" [don't speak, slave] or "skase, doule" [shut up, slave]

Er... if you plan to add any more Greek then I am more than willing to help with the translations. Just email me :)

Anyways, can't wait for the update!

I don't like her, she needs to die *nods* Die a slow painful death. :P Can't wait for the next part, keep it up!

Nice to know you're still alive and kickin. sorry about the comp troubles.

hA..hA...hA... Poor Sean!!!! Lovely!!! I like it! You're good !! I don't have any pity to him! At least it worth it! I hate a man like Sean clearly! But I like you! Well, my laptop is broken or rather crash! Shit! My Papa gonna kill me! What do I do? Double killing!? Anyway, I love your story and always waiting for it. The sudden appearance of mother sire, eh. She looks like interested to our lonely kitten. Good luck with your mouth, little kitten

Of course, I had to do the mandatory arm pump and jump around saying yes, yes, yes. I love it when you up date. Sorry to hear about your computer problems, on top of your health, that's just not right. I shall make offering of chocolate rabbits to appease the gremlins that plague you.

I'm reading this at 2 am. I was just about to shut my computer off when I thought I'd swing by and check the originals. Lo and behold, there you are again. I'm just lost. Or i'm tired....but what the heck just happened? Grandma is kicking everyone's ass--Brahm in bondage, nice mental image to go sleep with. er...yeah.

Keep writing. I love Kitten. Sean, eh? Brahm - I'm starting to like. Please give me more soon. More please.

P.S. don't you just love it when you get pornographic reviews/emails - through the wall indeed. hummph.

Mitts

Oh shit....Brams 'mum' seems to be a little Hitler on legs...The original poison dwarf..lol..
What does the fates hold now, for Martin and the others...Will Bram dare oppose her?....And what would happen if he did?

I already don't like Felicia!!! I want more bram/martin! I can't wait for Martin to kick her ass!

EEPS!!!!!! I'm not likin this gal too much!!!!!! AHHHH! She so scary!!!!!!! Hmmm I definitely think you should update again like RIGHT NOW!!!!! hee hee, but I shall be patient and give you a little while. However, I can't promise that eyes will not be poked!!!! YOU SHOULD UPDATE AND SAVE THE EYES FROM THEIR MISERABLE FATE!!!!!

Yay!!!! An update! Hope your comp issues work out. I love the unexpected twist with the 'mother' showing up. Somehow, I'm quite happy that Bram gets a turn in chains.