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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I'm so happy she's dead! *evil smile* Ok, I found one mistake, well, one that I can actually notice right now. "...the new whole in her body." Should be 'hole' not 'whole'. I loved this chapter though, nice little look into Bram's past too. So what's going to happen next? I can't wait to find out.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! that's cheating! You can't say Bram win! It's the Kitty win. afterall, it's because the kitten bit the Felice witch. Well, I want to see what happen to Red. If Kitten really become RED personal pet or if Red really doing smut to Kitten in front of the family, will the family (sean, Bram, Blue) feel the jealousy? I wonder? But it's really interesting to see the over jealous family *grinning like a wolf* T_T
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was promised a labour day update. whaaaaaaa. whhhhhaaaaaa. *sniffle* rubs snotty nose on sleeve, picks up cat toys and pocky and heads back home :( sooo sad
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent...
Really like this story. And I have been one of those that have waited patiently for your return.
I am glad that you are now settled and will be writing more.
I really like how your write your characters and also the way they speak, especially Martin.
He seems so damn cute.
Post more when you can.
BCM
Really like this story. And I have been one of those that have waited patiently for your return.
I am glad that you are now settled and will be writing more.
I really like how your write your characters and also the way they speak, especially Martin.
He seems so damn cute.
Post more when you can.
BCM
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shades of the Aztec!!! I guess that would make me barf too if that was pulsing against my stomach. I shall rescend my whine from earlier. You can delete it if you so desire. My guess is that Martin is now possessed by whatever the hell was in slutty baby/momma.
Excellent work. More please. (big evil grin)
yes...this review is on labor day!!!!
Excellent work. More please. (big evil grin)
yes...this review is on labor day!!!!
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More and I can't help but get a kick out of "Sebastard" as a nick name :X I can't wait to see what happens next and yes, I'm rooting for Bram. I love him. Anyway, update soon!
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm back and totally enjoying the new chapters! Sorry about all your moves,and stuck planes and things that have kept you from updating.
I'm glad youre back... WRITE DANG IT!!!
As always enjoyed the story... this chapter was a bit short though...
I'm glad youre back... WRITE DANG IT!!!
As always enjoyed the story... this chapter was a bit short though...
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, his is going to be a long review. Please sit back, relax, and here is two donuts (oo) and a coffee (wished I can draw a coffee for you :P) for you time.
It is 3:56 in the morning and I just spent 3 hours reading all 30 chapters. I must say this is: RAW-UNCUT-BEAUTIFUL-FUNNY-RACY... I can just go on with the list, but for now, my mind has been blown away to the skies. I have to say this is too:(not to make you bashful or anything, but this has to be said) You don't come to stories like this everyday. This is damn good and YOU ARE THE MASTER OF YAOI! YOU ARE A WRITER OF EXCELLENCE. OMG,I MEAN...TRULY, THIS WORK IS SO GREAT, THAT I CAN'T REALLY, HELL, NO WORDS CAN REALLY EXPLAIN IT. But, if anyone hasn't told you, hun, you have a talent that the whole world needs to see. Sh*t, if you wrote a novel, I would probably be the first person in line to purchase it ( if you do, let a girl know :P). Anyway, this talent you have, should not be wasted. And, we, as you readers, are more than happy that you are sharing this with us. So, many thanks to you. Keep up with the great work and I'll be looking forward to reading more soon!!!
Smile :) Celestial Devine
It is 3:56 in the morning and I just spent 3 hours reading all 30 chapters. I must say this is: RAW-UNCUT-BEAUTIFUL-FUNNY-RACY... I can just go on with the list, but for now, my mind has been blown away to the skies. I have to say this is too:(not to make you bashful or anything, but this has to be said) You don't come to stories like this everyday. This is damn good and YOU ARE THE MASTER OF YAOI! YOU ARE A WRITER OF EXCELLENCE. OMG,I MEAN...TRULY, THIS WORK IS SO GREAT, THAT I CAN'T REALLY, HELL, NO WORDS CAN REALLY EXPLAIN IT. But, if anyone hasn't told you, hun, you have a talent that the whole world needs to see. Sh*t, if you wrote a novel, I would probably be the first person in line to purchase it ( if you do, let a girl know :P). Anyway, this talent you have, should not be wasted. And, we, as you readers, are more than happy that you are sharing this with us. So, many thanks to you. Keep up with the great work and I'll be looking forward to reading more soon!!!
Smile :) Celestial Devine
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for answering! Thats what I thought it ment, but I didnt wish to sound stupid and guess, you know? Thanks! Also good luck with your moving and everything. I completely know how you feel about moving so much. As a child I moved about 12 times in one year. :D So good luck with everything!
Vicky
Vicky
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh...but...but...wah. You big tease. Going to go mope now. Taking my kitty treats with me. :( Update soon.