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im new to this site and just found this story it is really good hope you haven't finished there like so many others do please give us some more chapters soon thanks

Love the series, I would love to see you continue it. Maybe one day Myer will realize that all those bad memories of things at places with his mom they are making new happy memories for him. The series is well written, I'd hate to see it end.

I remember reading this story several years ago, and it's still one of my favorites on the site. The characters are wonderfully written and the story is alternately heartwrenching and heartwarming. I hope you continue writing this, really hope things work out for Myer and Lilly!

awesome! :D will you continue it?

Okay, I don't know if someone else has mentioned this to you yet or not, although I'm sure I'm not the first one to have caught it.. In chapter 11 you mention a "Mary", at first I was confused and then I realized you meant Cynthia (at least, I think that was her name in the previous chapters). I hope my pointing this out helps you rather than discourages you. I'm enjoying this story and plan on reading your other two as well. I've already read Star Bright, at least what you've gotten posted. Anyway, keep up the wonderful work! -grins and goes back to reading-

This is an excellent story, which really makes you reflect on how you would react in Myer's place to his love's differences. I would definitely like to see more of this story and soon as only just now have certain problems arisen in the plot. You could probably write at least a few dozen more chapters if you would go a little quicker, seeing as how you started the story back in 2006. Otherwise, there were a few gramatical errors, but those could easily be overlooked and did not affect the overall quality of the story. Good job and I hope to read more chapters from this very soon!

wow, i really missed this story!!! thanks for writing again! can't wait to read what happens next.

Don't albinos have red or pink eyes? It's because of the lack of pigment, I think. So how does she have gray eyes?

um, privates?

She asked "how do you think it went?" twice in a row. Some editing needed there.