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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent as usual!
Now, of course, the ugly question rears its head - do either - or both of them have AIDS?
Now, of course, the ugly question rears its head - do either - or both of them have AIDS?
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh - I've missed these guys SO much.
Andrew handled that well - and, in the end, so did Jon.
Andrew handled that well - and, in the end, so did Jon.
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like the style that this is in
its really bittersweet and kinda i dont know, clean?
i liked how you didnt put in the graphic details of when they have sex or whatever.
i think that would have drawn away from the story.
i would love to see what happens next.
update soon please.
its really bittersweet and kinda i dont know, clean?
i liked how you didnt put in the graphic details of when they have sex or whatever.
i think that would have drawn away from the story.
i would love to see what happens next.
update soon please.
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh - a beer? How absolutely naughty. {grin}
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow - wasn't expecting that...
Not like I ever try figuring out anyone's plot. When I like a story, I just read and let it happen.
I guess all the goodness between Jon and Andrew lulled me into happily-ever-after thoughts. And sister Sarah sure threw a clinker into that.
Now I can't help myself - fearing that Andrew will find out and do something that hurts him and Jon.
This means, of course, that I've really come to care about your characters. Excellent story-telling.
Not like I ever try figuring out anyone's plot. When I like a story, I just read and let it happen.
I guess all the goodness between Jon and Andrew lulled me into happily-ever-after thoughts. And sister Sarah sure threw a clinker into that.
Now I can't help myself - fearing that Andrew will find out and do something that hurts him and Jon.
This means, of course, that I've really come to care about your characters. Excellent story-telling.
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Meant to add a "Happy New Year" in the last review.
And also to ask for a link to the Nano novel thing. I'm interested in trying this myself.
AydenSadari@aol.com
Thaks!
And also to ask for a link to the Nano novel thing. I'm interested in trying this myself.
AydenSadari@aol.com
Thaks!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I freely admit I wish you could put out five chapters a day - or maybe ten...
But I love each and every one.
Andrew was so touched by Jon's williness to fight for him! Excellent!
But I love each and every one.
Andrew was so touched by Jon's williness to fight for him! Excellent!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, strawberry
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
I like this fic, you definetely have something here:)
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
I like this fic, you definetely have something here:)
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December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay yay yay!
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do love this story - and how you keep teasing us!
It's coming along very nicely.
It's coming along very nicely.