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for Hidden Away

by Sardave

person maccam
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*HUGS* i just love they way the try to matchmake! more please.
person maccam
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'll make a toast with them "here here" yes i'm soooo happy for them. i'm smiling can you see. Now get started on the next story deary!!!!
person Avid Reader
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to reading the epilogue and the other. Truly reading this has become like an addiction!
person maccam
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That that bastard!!! Oh if i was there!!! I knew he had something to do with her parents death. i only hope someone gets to her and soon. I can't wait to read more, even though it's only one more chapter to this story.
person maccam
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No i don;t think you're moving to fast, but know this nine months is a long time :) if she is pregnant i'm happy and scared for her. i want them to be happy.
person Avid Reader
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...please update soon.. this is really one of the few stories on this site that flow as well as yours...keep writing like a star!
person Mama T
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really great fic! :)
person maccam
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*CRIES*

person maccam
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with the father. Hm do they have a lawyer that they can talk to about naomi's case. maybe seek out some legal advise?? I hope the dizzy spells are what i think they are :)
person maccam
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know i had a thought, when they got her out of there figuring that he was gooing to follow them, they should have had another carriage waiting to take her sister in. no one would have know. then they could all have meet. i'm scared for them now.