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CHAPTER 5
Oh, such cliffhanger! He won't really tell the truth, huh? Olavi is drank and the timing is not right. Man, you've got to update soon!

It makes a lot of sense that Aino does not trust Alex. She does remember the war and what happened to her older brother. I wonder if she suspects anything, she is watching Alex, after all. Aino also would be paranoid about Olavi, she can't loose her only brother or have him in any sort of danger.

I like the dream where Elias was almost real. It was like he tryed saying good buy and sort of guided Alex to Olavi. Wonder what is going to happen next.

Great update, Kolgrim, thank you.

HAPPY THANKSGIVING
I know that you are not in US but Happy Thanksgiving anyway! This is a Holiday when families get together and eat a lot of turkey, he, he. I have a day off. I would like to compliment you on your excellent writing and let you know how much I like your stories. All of them are just so good:D Thank you, Kolgrim.

heheh that was me! XD

thank you for this lovely chapter. i cant wait until the next x[

eep. that's a very nasty place to stop. I can't imagine what Olavi will do when he finds out about Alex' reasons. I hope he understands. I even hope he's disappointed that kiss wasn't about him. Update soon please?

woah ho ho...sascha...kissing the little brother? He's screwing up his misson. I wonder how this will all pan out. I never thought you could pull off a sequel that still uses Elias as a central object/character, even if he is dead. I miss Elias too! I wish he hadn't died, but his death was still very important. I can't wait to see what happens next! Great update!

This was really good. i have to say that he probably was kissing Olavi. I am sorry for your loss. I recently lost a dear friend too aso I know how hard it is. The following is a line or two from the story that was incorrect so I corrected it with the stuff in the brackets. "he had dependent[depended] on his brother much like he would have relayed[relied] on a parent. It was strange now, now that he was at the same age and he did not feel like he could do the same[insert things] that[delete] his brother had. Take such a responsibility of them[he was responsible for them]"

Is that a dream, or were those actually Olavi’s lips he’s capturing? *confu* You can’t stop there! Oh sweet goodness, Olavi is so adorable. I like him because he ’s the only person there who is not scarred by the war. Because he was so young he managed to stay relatively innocent. In a way he’s the person Elias could have been if the war hadn’t been there. I think that’s also why I like him more then Elias. On the other hand it’s not nice everybody thinks of him as the spitting image of his brother, because he really is a different person. I hope in the end Alex will like Olavi because he is Olavi and not the ghost of Elias. Though right now I don’t believe that’s what’s happening…
Did I mention your writing really improved? Because it did, I’m totally amazed. Your English is getting better too, though I think the story little Elias told was about a rabbit, not a rapid… Um… yea, update soon please ^^

For some reason this story means a lot to me. I don't know what it is, the thought that something that means so much can be lost and you can still go on or what it is but it just means so much. To know that maybe after you lose someone it will be okay. Life can move on.

How old is Olavi? :/

I think you mentioned in Silent victims, but i forgot.
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. idk why..

will alexander fall for olavi? big age difference tho :P

Oh I wanted to just say this:

Alexander is still faithful to Elias, yes?