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for Ghost of you

by Kiira

person Yblue
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Little Elias is pretty well informed for a 3 year old. Only can't tell the diference between boys and gilrs lol. I just had this very wrong idea that Alex might whisper Elias' name in bed and Olavi thinks he's thinking about the other Elias. That would be awfully disturbing.

I like how Alex is growing to really love Olavi. I can only hope their relationship will still work when Olavi knows the truth. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, as usual...

I was thinking about making at trip to visit friends in Norway and Sweden at the end of next year... perhaps I should drop by Finland to claim my cookies! *grin*
person Yblue
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Btw I've added you to my msn list. I'm never on but you never know lol.
person Scribbles05
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this story! That was unique how you are making Alexander's relationship with Olavi much like how it was with Elias--very secretive, meeting at night, etc. Wonderful. I feel so sorry for Emma too though.
person Mayo
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the wait was worth it! D:

alkksdlka it was a beautiful chapter <3
person teeta
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just woke up and read saw you updated! The chapter is wonderful. Alexander was so close to telling Olavi! And when Elias walked in on them in the sauna, for a moment I thought it was a ghost, I don't know why. Stupid me. Are they going to part? No, don't do it to them, Alexander went through too much already. Anyway I loved the chapterand can't wait to read another. See you then!
person Onde
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear. I must confess, I have read all your stories and have yet to review a single one -sigh-

But I feel I have to review this one.

I am glad you did a sequal of the Silent Victims of War. I am glad you didn't make it some bit of fluff. I am dying to know what happens next, what will Aino do, so on and so on.

Thank you for the experience xP

And you best keep on writing ;)
person womo
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dang you for making me warm up to Olavi/Alex!! NOOOoooOOoooo!!!! I miss Elias.

I think I'm going to be saying that in every reivew....EliassssSS!!!

Anyway, cool chapter. I like how the differences between Elias and Olavi were pointed out...it makes me see Olavi as a different character, not as a replacement for Elias (although, i still do miss Elias). Thanks for updating so quickly!
person Yblue
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do I notice romance blooming? *giggles* Olavi is so cute. And no he’s not a child anymore you dumbass Alex, you made sure of that, lol. I wonder if Alex will ever tell him that his lost love was Elias… I think that would kinda hurt. It would be interesting to have Aino find out what’s going on. Alex might die though… I don’t want that! This story’s very different from Silent victims of the war. I hope this one has a happy end.
person teeta
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just came home from work and - surprise!- saw an upadate! The chapter was amazing, I liked the maturity Olavi seems to posses but I do wonder what he will do when he learns who Alexander's love really was. I love the way you describe the way in which Alexander starts to see the boy as a sepaetare human being and not his brother's replacement. Anyway, I loved the chapter and hope you'll be able to upadate soon. Happy Independence Day!
person madlodger
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 8
That was so romantic and sweet. Lovely. I like the way Olavi is described. He is a real person. In a lot of fiction I've read people don't bother to give young pretty boys personalities or intellegence. That always bothers me. Not so in your stories. Olavi is very special. I noticed a major difference between Olavi and Elias. Elias did like girls before being forced into other things. Yes, he did love Alex but it was different from the way Olavi does. If Elias had met Alex in normal life then they probably would of become close friends, not lovers. Elias would of been happily married with a lots of kids. Olavi does not like girls and he is completely free and out of two brothers he is the one really made for Alex. Does that make any sense?

I really wonder now what will happen to Alex and Olavi.

Good thing you've got a day off:) Happy independence day.