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for Ghost of you

by Kiira

person Yblue
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You almost got me killed! I had just finished reading this chapter this morning, and I was about to write a review when my father rang the door for my driving lesson. I thought I was going to crash into something because all I could think of was your story instead of… well, the road! The villain Vladimir is back and I doubt he has become a nicer person over the years. He’s after Alex now but what will he do when he finds beautiful and innocent (well… more or less) Olavi? And poor Aino. If I were her I’d go searching for a shotgun to blow Alex’s head off, so I’d almost say she took it rather well. Waah! I don’t dare to guess what’s coming now. I’m almost glad my dad’s car broke down in the middle of practice, lol. At least I didn’t kill anybody and I got home safely. And with a little bit of luck I won’t have to drive a car any time soon because I won’t be able to concentrate, thinking about this fic.

Please continue this soon! Your story is so great.
person midnighteyes
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Getting a bad feeling about this... But keeping the hope..(lol) Another great chapter sweetheart, keep up the awsome work...
person Mitts
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh....My....God! Olavi is in serious trouble...and Alexander is being torn off a strip by Aino over Elias!
Will Alexander be in time to rescue the boy?...Or am I jumping the gun, and Olavi will arrive safely at his destination?
Oh, hurry please, and write the next chapter....lol..
person teeta
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So ... I couldn't stop myself from leaving you my official approval. I loved the chapter from the very beginning to the very end. Everything it timed perfectly, the shock Aino goes through is described perfectly and so is Alex's reaction to what he hears fro the poor girl. I really worry about Olavi now, he seems to be in danger and he doesn't know. I only hope he won't meet Elas's fate ... And I am curious about what Alex will do when he gets to know who has come to "visit" him ...
Once again, great chapter! I can't wait to read another one (I know I have to wait ... *sighs*) but I will wait very (im)patiently.
person Anon
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter... But i know your evil, so i'm waiting for the axe to fall... Keep up the good work... Adam
person Mitts
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I just know that Olavi and Alexander are going to get caught...but by who? I think that's the important question...
Really like this follow-on story...ooh, and the last chapter...where 'Elias' says his goodbye...I was almost sobbing!
person Yblue
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ow. If Aino is going to spy on her brother she'll definitely catch them together. That would be really bad! Bad for Alex, bad for Olavi and extremely painful for Aino. Can't wait ... *evil grin*
person teeta
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I assure you, the chapter is worth the wait. Olavi has matured so much and he treats Alexander a litle bit differently ... He gets jealous of his brother, not knowing about it. And the scene had this little naughty streak in it, so cute!
Oh, by the way, we still have to wait for the Alexander's confession about Elias ... I really am curious what will happen when the truth is revealed. And 'aww' for the love confession.
I wonder about Aino. I don't think she is going to accept her brother's love affair so casually, isn't she? And the whole thing is even more complicated because they are really close to each other so Olavi won't leave her for Alex, right? Oh, the angst!
On the whole, really great chapter. I do wonder when you're going to continue.
Oh, and thanks for 'rambling' ^_^ Loved it!
person madlodger
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 9
OMG, Olavi told Alex that he loves him, his first time ever saying something like that, and did not get the same back! That must hurt. And now he believes that Alex is only with him because he lookes like his dead lover. That's real angst:)

Trouble has started already, I doubt that 3 year olds can keep secrets. Of course, they forget things too, but I don't know. This is scary.

I find it interesting that the one person that Emma is sharing things about Elias is Alex and not Aino. They are kindred souls since they both loved the same person 'that way' and it is sort of mysterious how people can relate to each other. It might be too painful for Aino to talk about this with anyone too.

Thank you for reviewing my story. I did'nt know that you read that staff! Wow! The next chapter will answer some questions and is mostly angst. It will get much darker, hehe:)
person midnighteyes
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright sweetheart, i'm taking a chance on the sequel.. It better not be sad, or i'll be mad at you...