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for Ghost of you

by Kiira

person midnighteyes
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry sweetheart that i didn't comment on the last chapter, but you know i always love what you write.. It's amazing what some people have to go threw to find a little happiness, but i guess its worth it at the end.. Standing up and clapping honey. Keep up the good work...
person beloveless
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! HE DIED! TAKE THAT YA RAT BASTARD!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Poor Olavi...I wish I could hug him. =( That's so sad. I hope Alexander can comfort him. Though knowing Aino she'll probably think he's with Vladamir on this and make him leave. She needs hugs too! Even if her attitude toward Alex really starting to piss me off. But it's understandable. Just wish she wasn't so judgemental about him. Ah well, hurry with a next chapter and thank you for bringing this one out so soon! *Virtual hugs to all!!!* ^__^
person keyonnamc
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update, and please, oh please don't let that bastard do that to Olavi. Please let Alexander get to him in time and beat the shit out of Vladimir. I nearly had an heart attack when Olavi got in that car. You are really good at cliffhangers, because you got me hooked. I feel like I need to be in a detox program.

Update soon...
person beloveless
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry with the next one!! And please let Olavi be safe!!! If anything happens to him I'll come after that guy Vladamir personally...he shoulda been killed a long time ago...*gets out chainsaw* But thanks for the update! *here's a virtual cookie* ^__^
person Mayo
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG ldakjdklsjad Aino is evil. o-o; Well maybe she's not since she's only looking out for her brother... lol. YAY 3 CHAPTERS! I was gone in Maryland for a week with no aff.net service. OH MY! XD
person Mitts
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So NOW Emma starts to have a bad premonition about letting Olavi go off with a stranger? Oh my goodness....And to find out her late fears are justified!...
Oh poor Olavi, jumping out of the moving car, and trying to hide, unsuccessfully from Vladimir...What does the next chapter hold for him, I wonder?
Will Alexander and Aino put their differences to one side, and help in the hunt for their loved one?...
But more importantly....will they get to the rescue in time?...
person teeta
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm .... how to begin? This chapter made my heart pound with fear. Poor Olavi, hunted like an animal by this sicko! You portrayed the chase so perfectly that I felt as if he were really chasing me. Rare ability, Kolgrim, to make me feel as if I were the character from the story. Not many authors managed that. Bravo! Can't wait to see what Alex will do. Will he manage to save his love? God, I hope he does.
person Yblue
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This... Is...Very... Scary... Will they save poor Olavi in time before he gets raped? Or killed? Vladdy can have a little taste but please don't let him kill Olavi that would be too cruel. Will Aino see the proof of how much Alex really loves Olavi? What will Emma do if she learns about Alex's relationships with both Elias and Olavi? And perhaps most importantly, what will Olavi do? ( *threatening glare* He either survives this or I skin you alive, your choice) Will he still be able to look at Alex the same way as before?

I canceled my driving lesson today. I'm glad I have.

Seriously, update soon.

.... pretty please? *flutters eyelashes*
person madlodger
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 11
They got caught! Oh, dear! Poor Aino, what is she going to do? There is no way she will accept this. But then she can't get any help either, she can't let people know that Olavi likes men. Finding Elias's letter must of been horrifying, that was not what she expected to find at all. Seriously, poor girl will need some counseling. She doesn't even have a boyfriend of her own, but her 16 year old brother does. How ironic.

I am pretty angry at Emma right now. Letting a kid go with a stranger in the strangers car was a poor judgement on her part. She must really have a thing for Alexander to believe that other guy harmless. Poor Alex, I didn't realize that he had a personal stalker all those years. No wonder he kept moving all the time, covering tracks.

This is getting very scary, I can't wait for the next update.

Very intense chapter:)

HAPPY NEW YEAR, KOLGRIM
person Bookworm51485
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ay, I'm not really at my best to review but I just wanted to leave some acknowledgment. I'm happy to see that one of them finally knows about Elias, which will probably lead to all of them knowing considering how Aino feels about him. I doubt she would hold back just to protect him. Though that ending doesn't seem like it's leading to anything good. I couldn't tell you for sure though, considering I don't remember if I should I remember who that is. I swear, I have half a brain in my head. I can't wait until your next update to find out what happens with Olavi and the knowledge of Elias' fate.