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for Ghost of you

by Kiira

person Mitts
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness....You had me crying all over again when I read Elias's letter to Emma...That was sooooo heartbreaking, and it brought back all the memories of the first story...
Very well done...a chapter to be proud of!
person Shaznay
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!
person jono
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm. thank you :)
person teeta
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope your nails are ok. I know I kept you waiting ...

What do I think of this chapter?

Perfect. Enough said.

...

Ok, If I left it like that, you'd eat me alive, hehe. So I'll try to be more specific. No Olavi in this chapter (I mean he's there but unconscious) but several questions are finally answered. I can see a light in the tunnel for their love (Aino seems to be ... warming up ... no, this word is still too strong, but in time she will, that's what I can see). The letter from Elias to Emma had me crying, really. Especially the part where he says he fell in love with Sasha. That was simply perfect, good job.

Can't wait to see whathappens when Olavi will wake up. The doctor said that he went through severe trauma but there is more to that. Olavi heard the truth about Alex and Elias and it was not said the way Alex did when talking to Emma and Aino. I fear he will have the bad overall picture of the situation and will avoid Alex. And in the same time Alex will be the only one able to help him ...

Ok, I'm stopping because I will try to guess what happens next and that is not what I should be writing in a review.

A really well-written chapter. My deepest thanks for it.
person star
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please! Oh please up date soon it's to good! I read the silent victims first it was so good and sad at the sametime that I just had to cry. Right oh way I started to read the sequel ghost of you, but I was to tear eyed to read that I only read first few lines before I had to stop. It was just to much for me, thats how strong of an inpact the story had on me. Now I just finshed the last chapter to it that Im begging you to up date soon PLEASE! You are a great writter you have a great skills for writting keep it up! Thanks
person Yblue
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you can keep your skin.^^ I like that Alex killed Vladimir, served him right, but of course he couldn't do it before the damage was done. I mean, everything has changed now, the truth is out and Olavi lost all the innocense he had left and he is badly wounded. I'm sure he'll heal physically, but he's taken in quite a shock. This was really the worst possible way of finding out about Alex and Elias, and I'm sure his idea of it at this time is very wrong. On the other hand I think Aino will give Alex more credit now, because she's seen how much he cares, and how much he's capable of doing for Olavi's sake. I doubt they'll really be friends though.
person keyonnamc
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn…so much for being optimistic. I hope history doesn’t repeat itself completely and Alexander will be able to save Olavi from physical and mental torture. Thanks for arranging for Vladimir to get the shit kicked out of him. I hope he suffers more, physical long term damage. Hope torture with the end result in death or castration. >>wishful thinking<<

As always the chapter was amazing, even though Olavi did get hurt. You still had me on the edge of my seat. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
person keyonnamc
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As always the chapter was amazing, even though Olavi did get hurt. You still had me on the edge of my seat. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
person Mitts
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my....(trying to type with one hand, because I'm biting down hard on the other, lol...)
Ohhhhhh yes, Vladimir deserved to die, and not just because he raped poor Olavi, but because of all the horrid truths and half truths he spouted while he was doing so!
Now Olavi will believe that Alexander was one of the ones that raped his brother,all those years ago. Now he will believe that the only reason Alexander took him, was because he reminded him of his brother....
How on earth is Alexander going to convince Olavi otherwise?...And will Aino even give him a chance to?..Or will she blame Olavi's rape on him too, and forbid him to see her hurt brother?..
Very good chapter...
person teeta
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's so difficult to review this particular chapter.

I didn't think I would feel this strongly for a made-up character. I can kind of (but only kind of) understand why You-Know-Who wrote what she wrote to you ...

Reading that particular scene was painful and really made me cry. There was this voice in my head, screaming: "No, this can't be happening, not to him, not to them." And I was really hoping for Alexander to come in time and tear this bastard into pieces! Poor Olavi, so much pain ...

But the question is now: how will Olavi deal with what has happened to him? He had this thought that what was happening to him is a kind of punishment for his supposed sin. For sleeping with Alexander. And he got to know about Elias as well ... That doesn't bode well for the future of his relationship with the man. I only hope that Alex will help him go through it all, that he will turn out the hero, "someone who holds out a hand and turns back time" ...

Ok, now I'm feeling a bit better. And I can truthfully say that yes, I AM looking forward to the next chapter. My curiosity is getting the better of me. There is still Aino's reaction to be seen ... For some time I thought that maybe this terrible misadventure would open her eyes to the fact that Alex really loves her brother but she saw whith her own eyes what happened to Elias and now to Olavi. She is scarred and I don't think that it will be any easier for her to accept ALex now. Just the opposite.

You left me with so many questions and doubts. You know I like trying to guess what will happen next, even if my guesses are completely off the track. But now I see so many possibilities ...

Ok, I'm buggering off now, have to write. ^_^