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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mitts
Oh, poor sweet Olavi..trying to end his desperate sadness and confusion by killing himself...So not the right thing to do..I'm glad Alexander got to him in time...Will they be able to work their problems out now?..I hope so, especially seeing as how Aino has now come to accept Alexander in her brothers life....
Oh, poor sweet Olavi..trying to end his desperate sadness and confusion by killing himself...So not the right thing to do..I'm glad Alexander got to him in time...Will they be able to work their problems out now?..I hope so, especially seeing as how Aino has now come to accept Alexander in her brothers life....
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do I get a review no 100? I think I do!
Yes, I was right, Olavi tried to attempt suicide. I am so glad that Alex reazlized what his strange dream meant. I am glad that Aino realized that having a brother - even the brother that loves a man - is better than not having a brother at all. You worried that it would come out crappy ... I wish I could write so 'crappily' sometimes ... your writing is full of humane emotions and always so warm ...
I loved the chapter and I look forward to the next one.
Hugs,
-E-
Yes, I was right, Olavi tried to attempt suicide. I am so glad that Alex reazlized what his strange dream meant. I am glad that Aino realized that having a brother - even the brother that loves a man - is better than not having a brother at all. You worried that it would come out crappy ... I wish I could write so 'crappily' sometimes ... your writing is full of humane emotions and always so warm ...
I loved the chapter and I look forward to the next one.
Hugs,
-E-
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!... it is deep and filled with so many emotions! you're great at describing the feeling of the characters! HUGS!!
Laaerie
Laaerie
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, hey you updated this. It's getting sweater, I'm glad you made them understand each other again. I see a happy ending for this sad story... which is good, I want Olavi to be happy. ^^
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you for updating! i've been waiting for a really long time for this chapter.
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! There's so much depth in it and now I have to find the first story dang it... Silent Victims?
I'm glad you updated again.. I was looking for it.
Keep writing!!
~Kawanee
I'm glad you updated again.. I was looking for it.
Keep writing!!
~Kawanee
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So beautifull, so sad! I want to cry! This story is so sad and amazing, and I want to just hug Olavi and make him feel better. Im so glad he forgave Alexander, and hopefully he can learn to trust him again. Great chapter, update soon please!!!
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I dont review your stories as often as I'd like. Lack of time is a pain. Dispite the few mistakes I'd like to tel you your work is always a pleasure to read. This time you reduced me to tears. my heart aches for them, it really does.
I look forward to reading more.
Work hard, Play hard, write harder and take care ;)
K.F
I look forward to reading more.
Work hard, Play hard, write harder and take care ;)
K.F
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, so sad. If me and my brother had loved the same guy I would have killed my brother. But this senario is so much better. I hope that you update soon. Ayesha wants to read more and will boycott pickles until you write more.
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so sure for a while there that Aino would find the note on her way out the door. I like the save though and the way you allowed them to express their feelings. It was the sweetest most heartwarming scene I think you have written in a while. It was really good.