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for Ghost of you

by Kiira

person bambi4real
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am glad tosee you started the sequel already. i was away for the weekend so Ididn't see this earlier. it is a great beginning though i cryied through the first half of it. I was thinking I should like document myself readin it because it seems i always break out in tears when there is mention of elias. I don't know if it is weird or anything but the fact that Emma's kid is called Elias makes me feel good because it's almost like he's given a chance to live again. Anyway now that I have been totally wierd I'll just end with it has me anxious to read the next ch!
person madlodger
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 1
Hi, Kolgrim. So, you are writing a sequel, that's wonderfull. Chapter 1 was intense and it answered so many questions. Elias's mother did die, we sort of knew that. I am glad to find out that both Aino and Olavi made it alive. Wonder how they made it out on the middle of winter and how they found Emma.

Good to see that Alexander Volkov did not get killed in war, although he was hurt. He can speak Finnish now, which means that he never went back home. Did Alexander become a deserter? I don't see how else he could of stayed, they would kill him before allowing not to go back. Why did it take him 11 years to come back?

That was a cool chapter, can't wait to read the next one, thank you, Kolgrim.
person Dykast
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on finishing a story and starting a new one. I wasn't too sure if I liked Silent Victims of War, but the ending was refreshing, if a little depressing. I did enjoy it. Though you do need to work on your tenses, but don't we all have that problem? :chuckles: And to say, I like the way you set up A Ghost of You. Very dramatic.
person Sekre
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, how sad already =3