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THis ch did not suck at all.It was really good emotionally. I liked the letter bit. It gave us a little insight into what Elias was thinking and feeling. I have to say however that I was hoping this story would be a little bit more happy and I haven't gotten any of that yet. I still cry when I read about Elias in this story. I am looking forward to the happy bits when they all start to move on from his death.

Don't think so lowly of yourself, I really loved this chapter (and last one which I also read just now *slaps self*) I like your descrition of the setting, I can almost breathe the atmosphere and all the emotions. I absolutely love this story and you don't have to hurry the slash for me. I'm on the edge of my seat wondering what Alexander is going to do now... If he doesn't tell them about Elias he'll feel horribly guilty forever, but if he tells them what happened things will be shaken up for sure. It would be so weird for Emma ("This dude i have a crush on was the lover of my childhood love? Freaky!") And I can imagine Aino will freak out completely too, as she'll go through the visions of seeing her brother get raped again, and she'll completely break when she learns of the circumstances of Elias' suicide. Maybe Alexander just tells Olavi? I can't imagine how he'll feel about it, but he seems to be interested in Alexander at the moment, which is good off course...

EW I HATE EMMA! >_<

I just don't like her character much. I love Olavi and Aino tho! :D

Every chapter made me cry, then it made me smile.

;_; please continue!! i loved the prequel to this story. your english has improved...? idk.. its very well written and i love it i love it i love it! ^_^

hey! just wanted to thank you for writing such a good story. i read the other one first, and i though it was very touching... it made me cry... (but thats ok, i always cry). you know how emma likes alexander, could you please make them not end up together? i like to think that alexabder is being faithful to elias, even if he is dead.

CHAPTER 3.
Ahhh, this is so good. Wonderful chapter. I understand why Alex is unable to tell the truth. He won't be able to for some time. All those people and the place are the only connection to Elias. It is the only material thing that he's got now. He is learning about his only love, who is long gone. That letter was like Elias speaking, so heart wrenching. I don't think that Alexander have ever accepted the fact that Elias is dead.

I don't think that Olavi would ever be a substitute for Elias. He is a reminder, of course. Perhaps when Alex will heal his broken soul he will be able to find a second love. If Olavi will be it then only as himself and the relationship would be much different.

This is really, really good.

Thank you.

i see what you mean by it has a slow start. this ch wasn't very exciting not that I think you could have made it any more exciting than it was. It just didn't lend itself to that sort of thing. I did find it ironic though that for once Aino is correct in her accusation and Emma doesn't even realize that she is absolving her lover's torturer.

Very nice. I had read Silent Victims of the War and hoped you would do a sequel for this cause I loved the characters, but I had no clue how you'd do it. I like this scenario. UPDATE!

I am so happy right now that it is unbelieveable. I loved "silent victims of war" so much and now theres this story. I love your writings completely and i can't wait for you to update. yay!!

Ahh, how sad :3 I wonder what they're going to do when they find out who he is ... and Olavi - I don't think that he'll ever be seen as 'Olavi' and instead Elias.

I sort of understand why Alex doesn't tell Emma what he came for right away, but... The old creep is looking at the little kids! lol but ok, if he's still the same person he won't do anything bad, right? Anyway I'm eagerly awaiting the continuation of this story. You startled me a bit with the m/f warning, but as long as you don't hook up Alex with a woman i'm prolly ok with it.