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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved that!!!! i can't wait to see what happens next!!
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This gets better and better evey second! I cant wait till Evan and Alex hook up.
There so cute together! Great chapter, update soon please!!!
There so cute together! Great chapter, update soon please!!!
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute story! Update soon, I want to know what happens next!
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WA~ Evan is in danger! I wanna know who is that guy! Update soon ne? My curiosity is killing me.. is Alex gonna come to the rescue?!
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoes the person? I got to know! Great chapter,update soon please!!!!!
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waaa???? i wanna know what happens!!!
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far, your writing is really great. The only constructive critism I have is that sometimes your dialogue is a little stiff and sounds kind of forced, maybe you could try to loosen it up a bit, ya know? Make them sound like the young adults they are. Other then that your story is one magnificent! Can't wait for the next update!
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!! Evan's naiveté concerning Alex was somewhat dissconcerting. Hmmm....will they hook up? Update, pretty please? I'll give you a hug!
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ha ha ha.... so cute~ Alex swung that way from the start! more more!
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 - AWWW! THIS IS SOOOO CUTE so far!!! The cutest story I've read in a while. I'm sooo glad I clicked on this!