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for Adventure in third period

by secretparadox

person Kyo-nezumi
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“I’m horny, you’re obviously horny,” “so why shouldn’t I take matters into hand?” I love those lines so blunt to the point my kind of people.
person Jenna
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it!

Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was interesting. He got his, now she'll get hers. let's see how far this will go. Lucky boy. Slutty girl. not quite plotless, but yeah, i think you can write something really hot here.
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Was this a reply to a challenge? I remember seeing something along this criteria...

There was one error that I caught, otherwise it was great! Keep up the good work!