rate_review Reviews

Wow this is really cool. i like the sense of control and dominant behavior. I have ot say that the song fic at the beginning was a bit tired and so I skipped over it but if itis going to e brief through out the rest of the story I don't see a problem with it then.

yeah i am so happy to see you updated this. I positively have a whetstone obsession now. I even got the background for my comp.LOL. I love the shy Rin. I think Craig's trying to ask her out was so cute and normal. Considering everything that goes on in her life.

THANKS for the email alert I really appreciate it. I love the story and being aware when there is an addition just makes me all giddy inside.;) This update was short! :< But at least there was Jaz in there. I don't know how Craig plays into the larger schemes of things but it looks like he might be a pretty major characte later on. I didn't find a lot of spell errors or grammar so that was good. Iknow when I write I have no patience and so there is usually a butt load of mistakes. Update soon.