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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MY god~ that was HOT! That innocent little boy is being taken advantage of.. whohoo~ update soon please~
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the first Original story I have read and i really liked it. PLEASE PLEASE continue
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorta squicked me out. not really. just slightly uncomfortable with the whole meeting on the internet thing. very good sex scenes! jesus! yummy. i do suggest you get a beta. or go over it yourself. there's a few words where i'm pretty sure a spellcheck put the wrong word. and about half way through a couple of paragraphs change verb text. like it goes from he was doing to he is doing. bit akward. other than that very good. ethan was adorable.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO NO NO NO... BAD BAD BAD... it can't just be 'the end' PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE... CONTINUE!!!!! PEASE!!!! you must say what happenes in the future!!!! great fic... but want more...!
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... this is SOOO WRONG ON SO MANY LEVELS............... But... I love it ;0
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! You have to write more!!!!! That was sooo good and hot!!! PLEASE!!!! *gets down on her knees* YOu've gotta write more!!!! please please please please!!!!! ;-; if u do, could u email me? ;-; please? please?
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FUCKING GODDDDD!!!!
You really wrote a fantasy of mi yaoi-coevered-mind!!!
I really hope you make a second chapter.
Hope to read you soon
You really wrote a fantasy of mi yaoi-coevered-mind!!!
I really hope you make a second chapter.
Hope to read you soon
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was exelent! Ethan was so cute! There should be a sequal gosh darnit!
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Continue plz! :)
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-Passed Out-
Seriously, this is one of the hottest fics I’ve ever read, and that’s saying a lot considering I’m addicted to slash fiction. This story has everything I want from a fic. Great setting, sufficiently realistic characters, edge-of-your-seat tension and sublime smut. Great work, even though you mixes up the tenses a little going from past to present. I’d love to read more!
Seriously, this is one of the hottest fics I’ve ever read, and that’s saying a lot considering I’m addicted to slash fiction. This story has everything I want from a fic. Great setting, sufficiently realistic characters, edge-of-your-seat tension and sublime smut. Great work, even though you mixes up the tenses a little going from past to present. I’d love to read more!