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Great story! I would love it if you continued this!

Athena

=O! You can't just leave it there! Please continue this, it is amazing! And it practically ended on a huge cliffhanger, what other things do they dooo?

Ha! Ethan is the perfect online victim~ LOL

Wow, Ethan is such an innocent little dumb ass! I can't believe how clueless about everything he was, and he let himself get tricked into things so easily; then again, I guess he did get what he wanted in the end. When Kyle handed him the candy I couldn't help but giggle. I bet that's how he gets all his boys.

Other than a few spelling mistakes, your writing was really good. The sex scenes was great! I really liked the part where they were watching each other masturbate via their webcams. It would really, really be cool if you wrote a second chapter to this. I'd really like to see what happens next.

Wow. Something tells me that Kyle is hiding something that Ethan's going to find out about. You get that vibe from Kyle that something tragic happened to him once. I think that they'd be cute together as a couple trying to keep their love a secret. Heheh. Ethan's so cute! Seriously, it's funny when a teenager is as naive as he is. He'd have to be naive to answer Kyle's pervy questions with innocent ones! Haha!!

Awwww. I loved it. The ending especially. It was just so adorable. I'd like to see this story go farther.

Stupid kid. He's lucky that worse didn't happen to him. Though I get the feeling that Kyle actually cares about Ethan. Very hot. I liked it. :)

Wow. I really hope that there's a sequal to this. I hope Ethan isn't getting used.

You should add more! I loved it.

Hi, Shinji and Welcome! ManBoyLove.Com is a very good story. I love the detail you put in writing, it is almost like educational video: kids, beware of internet. You would'nt be a teacher by any chance? We have quite a few here and they write the kinkiest plots:) Glad you published this, chapter 2 would be nice. Thank you for writing, Shinji.