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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, Sonny is fun.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dissociative disorders has been my obsession as of late so I'm glad I get to read about it in your story. While this is only fiction I'm refering to I've gotta say I wish Sonny had killed the parents BEFORE he had to sleep with the mother. The style is still great, the story is flowing nicely, and I especially love that you update frequently! I kinda feel sorry for Micky - Blood pushing away his advances and now the added "threat" of Seth. I wonder how that's going to work out. I also hope you write some nice BDMS-ish scene with the judge and warden. By the way...maybe I wasn't paying close enough attention when I read, but who's the readhead Sonny's interrested in? Is he knew? Can't wait to find out.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The redhead is Roddy, I describe him as having reddish brown hair. auburn.
No one seems to have picked up on why Sonny and Seth really decided to kill
their parents. It wasnt the sex with his mother. They had endured years of sexual
abuse without resorting to that level of violence. His mother "suddenly" becomes
pregnant after 14 years as soon as she has sex with her son.
It was Seths, or if you want to be technical, Sonnys baby she was carrying.
Thats why they killed them.
In a way it was an act of mercy on their part.
Im sure you can imagine how often they both had wished someone had done the
same for them so that they would never have had to be born.
It was the thought of their parents having another innocent child to use and abuse
that pushed them over the edge.
Thats why killing their parents came later.
No one seems to have picked up on why Sonny and Seth really decided to kill
their parents. It wasnt the sex with his mother. They had endured years of sexual
abuse without resorting to that level of violence. His mother "suddenly" becomes
pregnant after 14 years as soon as she has sex with her son.
It was Seths, or if you want to be technical, Sonnys baby she was carrying.
Thats why they killed them.
In a way it was an act of mercy on their part.
Im sure you can imagine how often they both had wished someone had done the
same for them so that they would never have had to be born.
It was the thought of their parents having another innocent child to use and abuse
that pushed them over the edge.
Thats why killing their parents came later.
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it i love it i love it
update update
update update
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AGH! I love this story SO much! *hugs*
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing style!
I just finished the whole thing, and I can not wait to read the next chapter.
I just finished the whole thing, and I can not wait to read the next chapter.
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 11
Two wolves, huh? One for Seth, one for Sonny. This is more then good! Hope Alistair and Royal Pain will get to business before retirement, though;) Life is short after all. I like how Florence Abigail's eyewitness account went. A long time ago I've read the article about how unreliable eyewitness accounts are, like they are based on people's believes more then actual happenings. This story nails that right on the head. The small town police will never solve this one. Very good chapter.
Two wolves, huh? One for Seth, one for Sonny. This is more then good! Hope Alistair and Royal Pain will get to business before retirement, though;) Life is short after all. I like how Florence Abigail's eyewitness account went. A long time ago I've read the article about how unreliable eyewitness accounts are, like they are based on people's believes more then actual happenings. This story nails that right on the head. The small town police will never solve this one. Very good chapter.
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay, Some bloodseth interaction xDDD And -cough- Innocent Seth, hm?
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Freakin amazing! Update it soon!
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 10
Wow, you update so fast that I can't keep up with replies! ( that was not a complaint, but a compliment;] )This story is getting even better, Sonny twist had really come as a shock, little Seth was so abused that he'd created split personality, now that I did not expect. The kid looks like an angel but in reality is a walking time- bomb. I don't feel sorry for Peewee at all, he got his. At this point I usually say: 'next update soon' , but it is already fast. Thank you!
Wow, you update so fast that I can't keep up with replies! ( that was not a complaint, but a compliment;] )This story is getting even better, Sonny twist had really come as a shock, little Seth was so abused that he'd created split personality, now that I did not expect. The kid looks like an angel but in reality is a walking time- bomb. I don't feel sorry for Peewee at all, he got his. At this point I usually say: 'next update soon' , but it is already fast. Thank you!