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Although it looks like Seth/Sonny are in danger of getting found out, it´s also subtly indicated that Sonny already has a plan how to solve this problem. Very well written. I´m anxious to read what happens next.

Good so far.

Update please!

darkangel1210

mmmmhmmm mickeys gonna die! kill him sonny! kill him good!!!

dun dun dun the black feather! o.o;; ooooo somethings gonna happen soon! i can feel it in my bones!!

Umm...you should update. It would make a lot of ppl happy ;)

the feather thing, creepy - as for roddy, wow ... I wonder if he will heed Sonny's warning.

The last chapter was great but right at the end you made a mistake. The crow suddenly began a raven which is a completely different type of bird.

Not all crows are ravens but all ravens are crows. In this case my crow was a raven.

Too wit:Crows account for an entire family of birds, Cordivae, that includes the raven species. That is, all ravens are crows, but crows can be ravens, jays, or magpies. The issue gets a little confusing because of how people typically use the terms; many commonly refer to ravens and crows as species, both in the genus Corvus. While these two blackbirds have many similarities, there are differences in their appearance, behavior, and habitat.

I only read up to chapter 9 so far, but you so deserve a review now!

Considering the fact that he was fairly well soused by now and most of his teenage wank material was sitting right across from him giving him a look that was dead sexy, Royal thought he was showing quite a bit of restraint at that point. Then Alistair licked his lips and restraint rapidly faded into a distant memory.

So... dunno if you get this reaction all the time, but that is definitely my favorite pairing! XD And isn't it just wrong? There's a whole prison-thingy full of young guys waiting to be adored by their readers and I go of and ship the judge and the boss of said prison. I actually thought about the two of them as a pair before the whole kiss-and-run incident was mentioned and squeeled in delight when it actually happened. XD You rock!

And now I'll read the remaining chapter to see if poor Royal and Alistair will someday get to have their way with each other without Zoe bursting in on them. ^^x They both have awfully pretty names btw!

Thank you so much! Actually I think Alistair and Royal are the hottest things too. =p
I love the fact that they know each other so well and for so long yet the passion is
still so blisteringly obvious between them.
Thanks again
DF