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for Blood Vane

by devilfancy

person kanjil
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now it's obvious that Roddy is plotting. I liked very much how this is revealed in the scene with Micky. The introduction of this chapter is very thought provoking. I hope to read more soon.
person Sekre
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whooa, I wonder what Roddy has in mind ... that trixy kid.
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the e-mail, I love this story. I definitely can't wait to see what happens next, so I'll have to keep an eye on it.
And on another note, poor Mickey needs a hug
person madlodger
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just dropped by to say:

HAPPY NEW YEAR!
I had good time this year reading this story, hope to see more in 2007:)
Thank you.
person Tristram
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took so long to review the new chapter. The story is still great (I think I'm going to need a thesaurus just so I don't keep sounding like I'm repeating myself)I still don't think Sonny/Seth should trust Roddy, I still think he's planning something and can't wait for that shoe to drop. I'd like to read more about what's happening with Blood - about the dreams and the feather...and the triangle...can't wait for the next update :)
person Rosei
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! A truly well written story of
vice, brutality, split personalities,
and death!!! HA HA HA HAAAAA!
Thank you.
person BrucesGirl
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I stumbled on your story, and even though I'm a stickler for format and grammar, your story is so masterfully woven and original that I'm not even gonna care about nitpicking. I got to the most recent chapter, and I was thinking to myself, goddamn it, I gotta wait for an update now!

My god, this is so good. If you found the right beta, you could push this story so much further. And it would totally deserve the attention. *giggles* I even want to draw fan art of Royal and Alister.

*squee* So good! Update!!! Soon. *whines*

Merry Christmas!!!!
person devilfancy
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. =>
I know I am in desperate need of a beta but its really hard to find
a good one that can keep up with me.
Thank you again.
person madlodger
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 21
Hi, devilfancy. It just occured to me that in this fic only two people have an interesting and fulfilling relationship, Alistair and Royal Pain, and they are mature adults. They really do have fun. The mini-skirt? He, he, he! What about the other guys? Everyone is pretty lonely. Roddy is talking love but it is strange and does not feel right. He does have a hidden adgenda, after all, he spent all this time in the infirmary with nothing to do but think. Wonder what he is going to do. Good job so far:)
person devilfancy
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Actually, Madlodger I find that that is generally how things really work.
Teenagers are usually lonely and angst ridden with very little idea
of what or who they really want. Its not a time that I would ever want to relive.
Merry Christmas to you.