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Your chapter is well written as always, but you keep talking in riddles and mysteries and the plot has barely advanced. You need to start getting into the crux of the story and explain things or get the action going. I don’t mean any of this to be insulting (it’s only constructive criticism) because I am hooked on the story and want something to grab my attention. Like whatever Roddy has planned, start explaining it - don’t just make vague remarks about it. Also why (after almost having his genitals ripped off) is he all into getting Seth? Did he lose his sanity along with the ability to hold an erection? I loved the twist with Sonny/Seth having a third personality – can’t say I saw that one coming. I still want to see more of Blood – get his background story, not just the teen angst. The story is named after him, but it seems like we get more scenes with the director and judge than we do Blood. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the hard work.

I really want Roddy to get the crap kicked out of him again. I just like the image of him bleeding on the floor... *sigh* Twisted, I know. Oh, Sonny/Seth has yet another personality? 0.0?? I wanna see! And poor Blood! Someone should have told him that teen = trouble with no effort, followed closely by being MALE! LOL MMMM! More!

Ok I just read this, and I can't WAIT for more!!!!! PLEASE update soon!!!!! I'm so curious as to where this is going. For a second there I thought there was gonna be a Blood/Seth/Mickey threesome or something, hee hee. That would have been hot *wink*. Ok, enough of my perverted mind. You've got me hooked b/c I've got no idea where you are going with this fic! But I am anxiously awaiting more!!!!!!!!!

Ahhh, what's he hiding ?!

*whines* Why can't Sonny/Seth just hunt down Blood and join in! Roddy just sucks ass! Then again, if they did what we wanted them to the story wouldn't be as fun... *wink,wink, nudge, nudge* Okay, so I'm waiting dammit! Oh, and can Sonny just crush Roddy's balls again one more time? Just for fun, mind you. Hehehe!

OMFG! with Mickey?! Freaking Mickey?! omg...and poor seth! oh goodness

I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
Only my personal favorites made the list:)
Thank you so much for writing!

Thank you Madlodger. That means a lot to me.
I plan on an update this week.
Thank you again.
*hugs*
DF

Dear God, that was funny! I was sucked in the moment I started reading this story and you never made me regret it! Gamecocks, swichblade, bubblebath! I was rolling! *sigh, wipes away tear* More! Soon!

I get the feeling the plot is picking up. Can't wait to see what Mickey is getting himself into.