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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 4
Hey, devilfancy, what a nice surprize! Blood Vane is wonderfull, well written ans smart. All smut is serving the plot, now that is refreshing. I like all characters, especially Blood . Now, will Blood get accused in beating that poor kid since he is in the Blood's cell and hurt? Thank you for writing , devilfancy, and I can't wait for new updates.
Hey, devilfancy, what a nice surprize! Blood Vane is wonderfull, well written ans smart. All smut is serving the plot, now that is refreshing. I like all characters, especially Blood . Now, will Blood get accused in beating that poor kid since he is in the Blood's cell and hurt? Thank you for writing , devilfancy, and I can't wait for new updates.
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! This is really good! I hope you continue with the story because I'm dying to see what happened to Seth's face....or maybe Blood's just shocked by his beauty! I guess I'll find out when you write the next chapter.
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love blood already!!! Aww, I wonder what's going on with Seth. Lovely chapter - love the length and how quickly you updated. Nice job :)
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god.... That was.... sexy. I normally call sex scenes cute but your blow-job scene was sexy.
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's weird... I was reading a creepy chapter and listening to a creepy song. Niki FM by Hawtham Heights. Different meanings but still same creepiness.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This sounds interesting. Please continue!
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for him... He didn't do anything. He was pimpped out. I want to cry for him.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor guys.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The next chapter will be titled "Blood" and give you all a
chance to meet our hero and get to know him a little.
Thank you all for reviewing.
chance to meet our hero and get to know him a little.
Thank you all for reviewing.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm on the edge of my seat here!! I love how fast you update. I don't think I've read a story where the author updates
everyday. Please continue!
everyday. Please continue!