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for Chocolate Kiss

by ShinigamiShimai

person ACisHere
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Consider your experiment into writing lemons to be a huge success, because it is.

The sex was hot, and even better, the story around it was well-developed. We didn't skip the journey and head straight for the destination, but took our time working out feelings and intentions, as well as showing vulnerability. Because of this slower approach, we found love at the heart of it all, driving it onward, and that's the best part of it all.

Great job. I'm a fan.
AssembledCarbon
person Aybaybay
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story.
I am a complete fan of this fic.
5 out of 5 most definitely!
person Bishonen
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was graet I just love yuri and there is nowhere near enough on this site I hope that you add more chapters.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
person Luva
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha they never do review much on this site. Well let me. I think was nicely done.
person Jd Wheels
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome!! I love Yuri!! You captured the moment brilliantly.. I applaude your skills.

JD