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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And that is why Aivon is cooler than John. =3
Although I can see John getting involved soon, what with the demons plotting and such. Good description in the first part as well.
Although I can see John getting involved soon, what with the demons plotting and such. Good description in the first part as well.
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The focus on Aivon was good. I like that character. Very interesting. =3
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter two was nice. More story setting up and such. Although it was implicated sex, it was still good. Sex probably would have ruined the little romantic bits, but that's just me. XD
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story so far. I liked how it starts, the prologue setting you up for angry demon fun and then it pulls you back into the past. I'm now interested in seeing how the book comes into play.