rate_review Reviews

The descriptions were really good. I liked Hisad. And the way he and Aivon interacted was great. *wonders what the shrine thing will bring*

Cool fighting. And very interesting dream. If I had that it would freak the crap out of me. XD

I liked the very end. X3

Nice. Good descriptions. Another chapter I was able to clearly visualize as I read.

Prologue through Chapter Three:

It's been a little while since I read "Believing In Myself", so I was worried that I might not remember everything I needed to know. But these early chapters do a great job of reminding everyone what happened in the last story while still moving forward with the plot and conflicts of the new story. Once more, I'm completely pulled into your world. I really enjoyed seeing Midas again, and sympathize with his search for meaning in his life -- I hope upcoming events offer him some answers. I also enjoyed our peek into Aivon's domestic bliss. Overall, a great beginning!

Love,
Falcon

Nice chapter. I liked how the pendant was explained, yet I'm still a bit confused on who Midas is. And what he is doing there. I think I may have missed something. Me and my short memory...

I liked it, though. It's moving along nicely. =3

Interesting, the magic elements and how John compared to the others who had mastered them. I liked it.

Nice actiony battle scene. =3 Hieas, showing off his power. XD

Man, John did get his ass kicked. That was surprising. And although it was shorter than the others it was still good. Nicely moved the plot along.

Nothing like a little sex to heat things up.

That would suck, though. Waiting all that time to tell her and she already knew. XD I'd want to kill him as well.

Nice. Although I have the feeling John isn't going to be able to relax and such for much longer. I liked the part where he juggled the magic. His not so strenuous training.